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[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 15
Added 2019-07-13 21:13:09 +0000 UTCAnd another Wip of the Teen Titan comic, hope you'll like it!
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Thanks! All credit for the story goes to Hyro!
2019-07-15 08:34:17 +0000 UTCNo problemo, Soap. :)
2019-07-14 14:40:06 +0000 UTCWow you know I was like this story would be awesome if this happens and it did it put a smile on my face. My complements to the creator
2019-07-14 11:46:58 +0000 UTCSounds good to me, thanks!
2019-07-14 11:08:59 +0000 UTCHappy you like the result, Hyro!
2019-07-14 10:53:15 +0000 UTCThanks! All credit goes to Hyro for the story!
2019-07-14 10:52:45 +0000 UTCThanks you two, I'll correct that!
2019-07-14 10:51:59 +0000 UTCThat works, yeah. Although the speech bubble would need to be altered to fit it.
2019-07-14 03:12:52 +0000 UTCUh oh she's got an evil look in her eyes.
Baltan2
2019-07-14 01:47:44 +0000 UTCI will only be happy if Starfire ends up in diapers. Way too many people like bad situations for Raven. I love her.
Matt
2019-07-14 00:22:23 +0000 UTCI didn't notice that it was "backfire" instead of "backfired". But yeah, I would change it to "A spell... backfired on me and now..."
2019-07-14 00:10:39 +0000 UTC"One of my spells" perhaps
2019-07-13 23:40:15 +0000 UTCI think some alteration is needed to the bottom left panel speech bubbles. "...backfired" is the first thing that springs to mind. I'm not sure about the start of the sentence either. "Some spell..." doesn't sit right with me. "Some spells..." would work if it was plural, but since Raven herself has only used a single spell then that wouldn't work. Something to replace "Some" at the start, but I am not sure "A spell..." on it's own is enough. What do you think, Soap? And everyone else?
2019-07-13 23:07:11 +0000 UTCI am so happy
2019-07-13 21:58:19 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying this. I was expecting an over the top reaction from Starfire but this works better
2019-07-13 21:45:47 +0000 UTCI would agree with both suggestions and also adding anoth "l" in the second really
Ricardo de Cervantes
2019-07-13 21:39:22 +0000 UTCBackfired* in the Third panel there should be a comma after the first "really" in "Really really big favor" Edit: I THINK there needs to be a comma... maybe get a second opinion on that
2019-07-13 21:15:23 +0000 UTCIt’s just keeps getting better
BeastBear5568
2019-07-13 21:13:41 +0000 UTC
