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[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 15

And another Wip of the Teen Titan comic, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 15 [WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 15

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Thanks! All credit for the story goes to Hyro!

No problemo, Soap. :)

Wow you know I was like this story would be awesome if this happens and it did it put a smile on my face. My complements to the creator

Sounds good to me, thanks!

Happy you like the result, Hyro!

Thanks! All credit goes to Hyro for the story!

Thanks you two, I'll correct that!

That works, yeah. Although the speech bubble would need to be altered to fit it.

Uh oh she's got an evil look in her eyes.

Baltan2

I will only be happy if Starfire ends up in diapers. Way too many people like bad situations for Raven. I love her.

Matt

I didn't notice that it was "backfire" instead of "backfired". But yeah, I would change it to "A spell... backfired on me and now..."

"One of my spells" perhaps

I think some alteration is needed to the bottom left panel speech bubbles. "...backfired" is the first thing that springs to mind. I'm not sure about the start of the sentence either. "Some spell..." doesn't sit right with me. "Some spells..." would work if it was plural, but since Raven herself has only used a single spell then that wouldn't work. Something to replace "Some" at the start, but I am not sure "A spell..." on it's own is enough. What do you think, Soap? And everyone else?

I am so happy

I'm enjoying this. I was expecting an over the top reaction from Starfire but this works better

I would agree with both suggestions and also adding anoth "l" in the second really

Ricardo de Cervantes

Backfired* in the Third panel there should be a comma after the first "really" in "Really really big favor" Edit: I THINK there needs to be a comma... maybe get a second opinion on that

It’s just keeps getting better

BeastBear5568


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