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[WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 17]

Work in progress of the last page in date of the comic, hope you'll like it! 

[WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 17] [WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 17]

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Thanks Secret, I'll make sure to correct that!

Thanks Ricardo!

Thanks Evilengine!

So happy to see some actiony/mission stuff rather than Summer just being babied. Excited to see where this goes.

Matt

Oh gosh, those crocs man. Also "I need to run from here" seems a bit clunky. Maybe something like "I need to get out of here"

Great Job with all of the panels Soap! With all the speech bubbles there's only one error and that is trigered should be triggered.

Ricardo de Cervantes

One or two spelling corrections: *Triggered, not trigered (panels 2 and 4), and *Literally, not litteraly (panel 4). Also you missed the H off 'with' in panel 7. Great stuff regardless, man =)


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