Special Treat! (Commissioned Microfic)

Hey y'all!

Got an extra lil thing to share today, a commission I wrote for someone that they didn't mind me sharing! I don't tend to do a lot of commissions, and this will probably be my last one for a good long while while I try to focus on visual novel, but hey, I hope you enjoy if it's to your taste!

(Side note, Patreon warned me that I might get in trouble for 'promoting a raffle' when I copied this story, so if it gets taken down suddenly that's probably why, although there is no raffle and this is a work of fiction lol)

Benn {Doomgender} Ends 

Commissioned by @alyrch99

~4675 words

CW:

• Flirting
• Sexual content
• Threesome
• Lil bit of alcohol
• Lame Halloween party

~~~

Music quivers the air, a bright electronic beat that drives bodies to a sort of inevitable motion. The whole room and everyone in it feels the rhythm in their chest. Everyone is dancing, talking, engaged and engaging, except——

“This music isn’t even creepy.”

Two women, sitting by the self-serve open bar. One is dressed as some sort of demon, with long curving horns and razor-black nails. Her outfit is tight, black and red. She has a sharp looking black ring on her left ring finger. Her name is Adline, and she’s leaning back on the bar counter, looking at the crowd of dancers with mild dissatisfaction.

“Hardly anyone dressed up either.”

The other is wearing a violent sort of demon hunter outfit, a bodysuit marked with protective sigils and draped in thin steel (unsharpened) throwing knives. She’s thrown her long black coat over the chair beside her, letting the low cut of her outfit show off her toned back and shoulders. She has a ring matching Adline’s on the same finger. Her name is Rev, and she is playing a idol rhythm game on her phone.

Adline sighs dramatically, checking to make sure her nails are holding up.

“We were promised a Halloween party, not a… shindig.”

Rev snorts without looking up.

“You sound like a dork, Ad.”

“Hey, this party is the one that’s ‘dorky’, I’m simply describing it accurately.”

She reaches over the counter and pulls a lime flavored hard seltzer from a bucket of ice, before wrinkling her nose and dropping it back in.

“They said there would be drinks too,” she laments. “But the only thing in the house with an alcohol content over two percent is the hand sanitizer.”

“You can’t drink hand sanitizer, Ad.”

Adline frowns at her wife.

“I’m not going to drink the hand sanitizer. I’m not a wild animal.”

Rev shrugs as she hits a 300 note combo.

Adline scratches her neck, and briefly wishes she was enough of a loser to play phone games in public. She then notices their mutual friend and party organizer, Sara, heading their way with a big smile. Adline elbows Rev.

“Shit. Try to look like you’re having fun, Sara’s coming.”

“I am having fun. I just triple S ranked on Fuwa Fuwa no Hoshi Zetsu Metsu.”

Adline turns to scowl at Rev, but is confronted with a sparkling image of a very colorful young lady in an heavily-ribboned dress doing peace signs on her phone.

“See?”

“Rev, I swear——”

“Adline! Rev! So glad you made it! Oh wow, you really got all done up huh?”

Sara is a very nice, very normal girl that the pair went to college with, and somehow have kept up with this whole time despite their obvious differences. It’s sort of like an unlikely animal friends video in which a pair of wolves hang out with a rabbit. She’s wearing a dress adorned with cheerful pumpkin faces, and a felt witch hat.

“Sara, you’re looking lovely as ever.”

“Aww, thanks Adline! Sorry for not warning you that it was more of a ‘casual costume’ theme. I hope you’re not too embarrassed…”

Adline throws her hair back, and traces a nail along her jawline.

“Oh no, I look incredible. It’s everyone else who should be embarrassed for failing to match me.”

She holds the pose for a moment, which is completely wasted on the world’s straightest woman. Sara laughs.

“You’re so funny Adline, I could never keep up with you!”

She pats Rev on the head, who nods appreciatively without looking up from her game.

“You two are so cute. You should enter the doubles apple bobbing contest together!”

Adline looks nonplussed.

“Apple… bobbing?”

“You know, you get on your knees——”

“You have my attention.”

“What? Oh! Haha! You’re so funny!”

Before she can continue, Sara is interrupted.

“Hey, I brought the ice.”

Adline raises an eyebrow as Sara fusses over the newcomer. The girl is, maybe a couple years younger than Sara, with dyed blue hair and a punkish angel costume that has obviously been lovingly handcrafted. She’s also, Adline notes immediately, extremely pretty. She bites back a grin.

“Oh, my manners, I’m so sorry. This is my cousin Lace. She’s visiting from out of town, and I bullied her into helping me out with party stuff, the poor girl. Lace, these are my best friends from college, Adline and Rev.”

“Charmed,” Adline says. Rev mumbles something and nods.

Lace looks their way and her eyebrows shoot up.

“Wow Sara, I had no idea you had such hot friends.”

She immediately turns red after saying that, and tries not to caught looking at the sheer amount of exposed skin on either of their costumes. Adline tries to play it cool, but her considerable ego has been stoked. Sara wags a finger at Lace.

“Oh no, you want no part of them. They got married last year but that won’t stop one of them from eating you alive.”

Lace gives her cousin a look that screams ‘maybe I want to get eaten alive,’ but manages to keep her mouth shut. Sara rolls her eyes and pats Lace’s shoulder with a sigh.

“Forget all that now, we have to get this ice to Alex. I’ll help you carry it! Talk to you two later!”

Sara smiles and shakes her head at the pair, before picking up a bulky bag and marching off.

Lace nods at them before picking up the other bag.

“Um. Nice meeting you both.”

Rev makes a noise like a goodbye, and Adline waves coyly. The pair are once again alone in the corner of the party.

After Sara and Lace are out of sight, Adline leans back against the counter.

“What a pretty little thing.”

“She was quite attractive.”

“And that outfit, it looks like she put some work into it.”

“Certainly she did.”

“It just makes you want to tear it off her with your bare hands, doesn’t it?”

“Oh, certainly.”

Adline turns to Rev, who is now playing something incomprehensible that involves a schoolgirl holding the largest rifle Adline had ever seen.

“Did you even look up at her??”

“Of course I did. I just don’t feel the need to gawk, like a certain someone.”

“I wasn’t gawking. I was appreciating something beautiful.”

Her grin widens wickedly.

“And thinking about all the ways I could destroy it.”

“Getting ahead of yourself, aren’t you?”

Adline scowls.

“With the way she was looking at me? I could seduce her, easily. All it would take is a little. Tiny. Push.”

Rev laughs cooly. 

“So you say.”

Adline knows it’s bait. She knows instantly she’s being baited. She, of course, is so terribly competitive that the idea of not taking it never crosses her mind.

“Oh, you think you could do better?”

“Yes.”

“Well, too bad. I want her.”

“She’s not property. We don’t get to decide that.”

“Rock paper scissors you for her.”

Rev pauses for a moment, and her screen goes dark.

“You’re on.”

They both look around to make sure no one’s watching.

“Rock, paper, scissors, shoot!”

Two rocks.

They do it again, faster.

Two scissors.

Once more.

Two rocks.

“Auuughh I hate this, you’re doing it on purpose!”

Rev looks innocently at her without saying anything. Adline puts her hands on her hips and stands up.

“You’re right. We can’t decide which of us she’s coming home with without her input. We’ll have to compete for her affection directly.”

“I thought you just wanted to ask her out.”

“No, Rev, I want to experience her. Get your head in the game.”

“What’s your plan?”

“Let’s keep it simple. We each take a turn to draw her in. Whichever of us succeeds gets a pretty toy to play with. If we both fail, then I guess this whole party really was a bust.”

Rev considers.

“Whoever goes first has a chance to win without com petition.”

“I suppose.”

She nods.

“You go first then.”

Adline’s eyes narrow.

“Why.”

“It’s only fair that you get a chance at her.”

“Oh, Rev. I’ll make you regret that.”

Adline fishes for a hard seltzer, pulling out a pomegranate flavored can, snapping the tab with expertly with the edge of her finger so as to not damage her nails. She throws her head back and drains the can without a second of hesitation, slamming it down on the counter.

“Disgusting. I’m ready. Where is she.”

Rev points Lace out by the window. She turns her head, not quickly enough to hide that she was looking in their direction. Adline smirks.

“Oh this is going to be breathtakingly easy.”

She stands, checks to make sure her outfit is in order and her breasts as exposed as she can reasonably get away with. There is no end to her confidence. She moves through the maelstrom of bodies as if she was born to do it, eyes lingering on her with every step. A smile dances on her lips. She likes when people look.

It’s louder in this corner, closer to the speakers. Nevertheless, Adline leans beside Lace, one heel kicked up against the wall to show off more of her thigh.

“Lace, was it?”

Lace looks a little flustered, hesitates, then says “What?” loudly. Adline closes her eyes for a moment, and tries again, louder.

“I like your name. It’s very pretty.”

“Oh! Thank you, I picked it myself!”

Adline hesitates. It’s too noisy for her to properly pull off her sexy voice, and that’s throwing her game off a little bit.

“I’m glad somebody else here takes the holiday seriously enough to put some effort into their look. Your costume is, quite attractive.”

“Oh yeah, I love getting dressed up for stuff. I put this together myself, sewed all the patches on and everything. It’s casual enough that I might wear it sometimes just around. Uh, minus the halo and wings.”

“Oh yes, it looks excellent on you. Though, I’m sure you’d be just as exquisite without it, as well.”

“Hah, yeah I guess I’ve got a pretty good sense of style even when I’m just being casual.”

“Thats——”

Adline stops herself, and takes a moment to reflect on the situation. Clearly, she thinks to herself, this girl is immune to charm. She taps a nail against her jaw, trying to decide where to go next. Lace is fairly unsubtle in sneaking peaks at her breasts, so it’s not like she’s not at all interested. She’s just got to get through to her. She puffs out her chest a little.

Time to swing for the fences.

“Look, Lace.”

She leans closer, giving her a seductive smile.

“I think you and I could have a good time. We should spend a little, personal time, together, and see what happens. I’m quite the entertainer, though I do admit a play a little rough at times~”

Adline grins. This innocent girl doesn’t have a chance. Flustered, blushing, grasping for words. 

“Take your time, I’m in no rush for your response~”

Finally, Lace manages to get her head together.

“Ah, I really appreciate that!”

Adline’s eyebrow twitches. Lace smiles without a hint of irony.

“I don’t have a lot of irl friends, and you two seem so cool, I didn’t want to be a bother, but yeah, I’d love to hang out sometime! I’m kinda halfway moved out here so it would be nice to have friends in the area!”

Both times she says ‘friends’ hits Adline like twin arrows through the chest. Her head slumps forward, silently admitting defeat.

“That. Sounds nice, yes.”

Adline is so thoroughly routed that she doesn’t even draw a little heart next to her name when they exchange numbers. They chat for another few minutes about innocuous things, before one of Sara’s other friends come by to grab Lace to help fill the punch bowl.

Walking back to Rev, Adline growls “punch isn’t even spiked” under her breath. Still, she has one small comfort as she drops herself into the seat next to Rev.

“Well, she’s the same as Sara.”

“Oh, boo, straight?”

“Nope. An idiot. Completely impervious to all attempts at romance and passion. Seduction proof.”

Rev slips her phone into her bra, which really doesn’t fit the theme of her outfit.

“My turn then.”

Adline shrugs and looks smug.

“If you must humiliate yourself as well. At least your failure will sooth the lingering sting of my defeat.”

“Yeah, right. Watch my coat.”

Adline cracks open a second seltzer. This one’s blue raspberry, and the smell gives her goosebumps. This is sure to be entertaining.

Lace has returned to her spot by the speakers, and is talking casually with someone Adline doesn’t recognize. Rev awkwardly skirts around the crowd, avoiding high concentrations of people. She looks at first glance to be timid, especially compared to Adline, but really she just doesn’t like to waste energy on things she deems unimportant. Weaving through groups, making small talk, looking people in the eye, all unimportant. She’s a sweet person, yet inscrutable to mere mortals.

Adline frowns and sips her drink as Rev reaches Lace. Rev can put on quite a show when she wants to. Still, there’s no way she’ll do any better with this girl. Adline’s nickname in college was ‘The Florist’ because of all the ‘flowers’ she picked. Rev was ‘that spooky girl who creeps around behind Adline’. No competition.

Leaning forward, Adline watches closely. Rev says something to Lace, then waves brusquely at the person she was talking to, who wanders off looking a little confused. 

The crowd keeps moving, making it hard to keep line of sight. Plus, Rev is standing directly in the way. Adline scowls, sure she’s doing it on purpose. Hm. She’s getting really close—— Hey! Is she touching Lace?? Was that allowed?? Oh, she’s brushing her hair back to whisper something in her ear… Oh gods, Lace’s face went so red.

…

Was that a kabedon?? Did she just kabedon that girl?? Adline winces. This can’t be good. There’s a fifty fifty chance they’re both about to get thrown out of this party. Adline quickly finishes her drink, and when she looks back, Rev is returning, and Lace is slowly sliding down the wall like she’s melting into a puddle. 

Adline puts on a brave face.

“C-crawling back with your tail between your legs?”

“No. I just came to get my coat. I’m bringing Lace back to our place.”

Adline pouts.

“Damn it Rev. What did you say to that girl?”

Rev shrugs.

“Oh no you don’t. I tried being flashy, I tried being direct. What worked?”

“You don’t know how to be direct. I just told her I wanted to see what kind of noises I could coax out of her with just my tongue.”

Adline drops her face into her hands.

“Rev. My love. You’re going to get hit one of these days if you say things like that to girls you barely know.”

“Calculated risk. I said some other stuff too. Gimme my coat.”

“Fine. I suppose I’ll just linger here in straight hell for a couple hours.”

“We’ll use the guest room, so don’t worry about it. Come back whenever.”

Adline shakes her head as Rev links arms with Lace, pulling her along with purpose. Lace looks completely entranced, and Rev is doing that frustratingly sexy quiet intensity thing. Adline smiles and looks at the hard seltzer in her hand.

“If this had been whiskey I would have won. The foul taste detracted from my charm.”

About 30 minutes later, Sara drops by again, this time carrying a sack of Pink Lady apples.

“Hey Adline, have you seen Lace? I need her to help me with the apple bobbing—— Oh no where’s Rev.”

“I’m afraid it’s curtains for your dear cousin, Sara. She’ll be ruined for marriage.”

Sara rubs her temple.

“It’s always the quiet ones, isn’t it. Ohhhh, I’m gonna give the two of them such a scolding for leaving me hanging. Unless you want to take Lace’s place?”

Adline hops up.

“Actually, I just realized I have a midnight matinee to make it to thankyousomuchforhostingusit’salwayslovelytoseeyougoodluckwithyourapplesbyeeee~”

“GET BACK HERE ADLINE——”

Adline books it out of there, all pretense of quiet elegance put on hold as she desperately tries to avoid learning the rules to doubles apple bobbing.

It’s a narrow escape.

~~~

Rev kicks the door shut as she pins Lace to the wall with her lips. The girl’s chest quivers, her body curls as she wraps herself around Rev. Her body screams for Rev’s touch. Coats are dropped. Costume props discarded. Breath exchanged.

They make it to the couch before Lace is thrown down, eyes clouded with lust as they stare at Rev’s body. Her lips tremble as she speaks.

“Why—— me——?”

Rev’s eyes betray no emotion beyond a wild hunger.

“Because I can’t help wanting to make a mess of something beautiful.”

Lace is dazzled, taken aback by the confidence with which she speaks. Not a hint of nervousness, of shame. Just power, plainly spoken to life.

“Do whatever you want to me,” she says breathlessly.

“I intend to,” Rev responds as she pops the buttons on Lace’s shirt, one by one.

~~~

Adline takes the long way home, walking patiently through the leaves as the breeze nips at her heels. With a dramatic sigh, she looks up at the moon.

“Waste of a perfectly good costume. Didn’t even get laid once.”

She looks down, noticing a group of men standing outside an apartment building, smoking. They must have heard her, since one of them looks about to make a pass at her. His eyes meet hers and it’s enough to make him falter. None of them say a word as she passes through them. They just watch without breathing, like you might if a wild animal came too close late on a dark night.

Adline hardly even notices the effect she had on them. She’s always intimidated people, especially since she hit her growth spurt at 14 put her a head above most teachers. She used to be self conscious of the way people react to her, but now it’s just part of the way she conducts herself. One of the things that drew her to Rev in the first place, those years ago, was the way she was simply herself, no matter the situation.

To be without shame.

That’s what Rev taught her.

…

She shakes her head.

“Now if only she taught me how she manages to get so many girls while barely saying a word to them.”

Adline looks up at her apartment building, then glances at her phone. No point texting Rev to check in. She deliberately doesn’t look at her phone while she’s ‘entertaining.’ She’d get distracted far too easily if she did. But, it’s been an hour, it’ll be fine for her to go up by now.

~~~

The door opens, and Rev makes eye contact with Adline over the back of the couch. Lace is squirming under her, not seeming to realize that they’ve been walked in on. Not fine.

Adline winks, only slightly flustered, and closes the door. Lace hears it shut, and jumps, startled.

“Haa… what was that?”

Rev frowns.

“I got so caught up I forgot to move us to the bedroom.”

Lace struggles to sit up, still dazed.

“Oh no, Adline? Is she upset that I came home with you?”

“No, just a little embarrassed. Walking in on your wife fucking a girl who turned you down and all.”

“Turned her down..?”

Lace’s face lights up, then turns red.

“S-s-she was asking me out too?? I thought she was just being friendly…”

Rev takes a sip from her water bottle.

“I always tell her she’s being too vague. She sounds like she’s rehearsing for a play, not propositioning you.”

With a sigh, Rev wipes her hands off on a napkin, her body framed in the lamplight. She’s still wearing most of her clothes, unlike the carefully-stripped-to-underwear Lace.

“We should move to the guest room.”

Lace murmurs something.

“Hm?”

Looking like she can’t quite believe what she’s saying, Lace repeats it, a little louder.

“I wouldn’t mind, doing it with her, too…”

Rev eyes her impassively.

“Yeah? Want me to invite her in? Fair warning, there might not be anything left of you by the time we’re both satisfied.”

Lace looks a little nervous, but mostly excited.

“If I die I die.”

Rev makes a slightly impressed face.

~~~

Lace makes a small noise. A pair of hands wrap slowly around her hips. Every bit of motion sends a flood of sensation through her, hot enough to burn her up from the inside.

She tries to press herself, wet and desperate, against Rev’s bare thigh, but those hands hold her back. A rich chuckle by her ear drives her to shiver.

“I thought you must be quite innocent back at the party. Staring at us both, at me, with lust in your eyes, but too nervous to say as much with your lips.”

Rev raises her thigh, just enough to brush up against Lace’s soaked panties. Her hips buck instinctively, and she releases a low whine. Adline breathes on her neck.

“But look at you now! If you were ever an innocent girl, it’s all gone now.”

Her hips keep bucking, Rev positioning her leg just enough to keep her stimulated, but not satisfied.

Rev takes a handful of Lace’s hair and holds it up, tugging lightly as Adline kisses up the back of Lace’s neck.

“We’ll drive you down into the depths of depravity alongside us. Beneath us. You’ll only have words to ask for more.”

Adline pushes Lace’s hips down, letting her finally, achingly, push herself against Rev, letting her grind her lips against her soft skin. Lace’s breath is haggard and her eyes are almost hollow, wiped clean from overstimulation. She moves her body like an animal, fingers twining into the sheets as she searches desperately for more leverage.

Adline nibbles at her earlobe, dragging out more hopeless gasps.

“I don’t think she’ll be satisfied with just this, Rev.”

“I think you’re right. She needs our help, Ad.”

Wrapping her hands around Lace, gently tugging at her nipples, Adline almost growls in her ear.

“She came here to get fucked, after all.”

Lace’s spine stiffens, her body frozen in a moment of barely coherent excitement.

“I am right, aren’t I? Say it~”

Trembling, her small voice sounds out.

“Yes, please.”

Rev and Adline lock eyes.

A flash of movement. Rev grabs Lace’s arms and kisses her, pulling her down onto the bed. Adline holds her hips so her ass stays up at a good height, sticking a little bit off the bed. Lace gasps for breath between kisses, in the rare moments Rev isn’t exploring her mouth with her tongue. Adline smirks, and tugs down Lace’s pantie

Rev has Lace by the hair, and bites at her throat, as Adline gets on one knee, rubbing her thumb along Lace’s lips, delighting in the instant reaction each time she touches her clit.

“You seem pretty well ready, but let me just make sure.”

Lace squeals and thrashes as Adline’s tongue makes a few slow circles around her clit, then broadly traces along her. She repeats that motion a few times as Lace trembles, toes curling, inelegant noises of pleasure escaping her. Adline teases at her entrance, tongue poking inside her ever so slightly.

Lace can’t take anymore. Her hips wiggle and her voice cries out, near on the verge of tears.

“Please, please, I need something inside me, please I—— I can’t…”

Her voice cuts out as Rev silences her with a kiss, but her point is made. Adline stands, daintily wiping her lips.

“Well I can hardly deny a lady’s request.”

Rev uses her legs to spread Lace’s as Adline carefully steps out of her panties. She pours a little lube into one hand, stroking herself in preparation. 

“You’re more than wet enough, but one can never be too careful, right?”

A sort of muffled pleading sound comes from Lace as Adline stands close enough for her to feel her body heat, but not close enough to touch. Rev is impatient, but Adline likes to draw it out, make them wait, delay the release. She gently parts Lace’s folds with her tip, pressing lightly at her entrance, pulling back ever so slightly when Lace pushes back against her.

Lace gasps for breath, her face falling between Rev’s breasts as Rev releases her.

“Ad, just fuck the poor girl, you’re gonna give her a heart attack if you keep teasing her.”

“Alright, alright, don’t rush me.”

Adline digs her fingers into Lace’s thighs, tilting her at the right angle for her to slide in. Lace accepts her greedily, her insides pulsing and tightening around her. Adline pushes in about halfway, pulls out, a little further, out, a little further, until her hips press against the back of Lace’s thighs. Lace clings to Rev’s chest, her cries slowly rising in pitch and urgency as Adline increases her tempo.

Rev’s hand slides down Lace’s belly, fingers touching Adline as she thrusts into her, before carefully rolling Lace’s clit with her thumb.

Lace’s head jerks back, and Adline seizes the moment, bunching her fingers into Lace’s hair, the other hand on her hip, lifting her off Rev’s chest, hitting an entirely new spot inside her. Lace‘s entire body trembles and twitches in time.

Still playing with Lace’s clit, Rev sits up a little, cupping one of Lace’s breasts with her free hand, kneading it playfully, using her tongue to tease her erect nipple, sucking on it delicately as her chest heaves as if she were running a marathon. It’s only a little more stimulation, given everything else being done to her, but it’s enough to push her over the edge.

“Haa, I, aaahh—— I’m————!!”

She doesn’t manage to say it. Feeling how close she is, and already being close herself, Adline rushes, pounding her hips against Lace as she struggles to articulate the situation she’s in. Patient and unshaken, Rev keeps her hands and mouth at work.

Lace gives a final series of overwhelmed gasps, as Adline buries herself deep, moving in and out ever so slightly as she cums. Lace’s insides tighten nearly unbearably, and she cums too, eyes wet and body spent.

“There we go. Sounds like you quite enjoyed yourself.”

Lace collapses breathlessly against Rev, clinging to her speechlessly with heavily lidded eyes. Adline and Rev share a wicked grin.

~~~

About 20 minutes later, a still naked Lace is cuddling with Adline in the bed, as Rev feeds her chocolates.

Lace looks around the room, taking stock in everything that’s happened in the past few hours.

“I really didn’t think this is where my night would end.”

Adline pets her hair.

“Me either. I’m quite pleased.”

Rev holds up a chocolate to Adline’s lips and she accepts it before continuing.

“That said, I suspect it’s a stretch to call the night over.”

“Huh?”

“My beloved Rev has an ulterior motive. She’s feeding you in the hopes that you’ll be ready for a second round. I think she hasn’t had her fill yet.

Lace looks over at Rev with a blush. Rev does a little shrug, and offers her another chocolate.

“I think I’m gonna need some real food before I can go again. And maybe a nap. And also I don’t know that I can move much.”

Rev nods, gets up, and leaves the room.

“W-where did she go?”

“I expect to get a laptop so we can order food. If you want to escape, this may be your only chance to run.”

Lace looks up at her, wide eyed.

“This is what my cousin meant when she said you’d eat me alive huh.”

Adline grins evilly.

“Absolutely. You’ll be trapped, toyed with and doted on relentlessly until we’re both satisfied.”

Lace grins back, still blushing.

“I think I can handle that.”

~~~