OTV: Chapter 2: Page 62
Added 2019-01-28 22:40:13 +0000 UTCThe group have some fun in the snow. It's nice to see Asriel just be a kid again, heh.
It's funny how many people expected the snowball to blow up. I'm afraid it's as anticlimactic as it looked, heh.
Comments
Doing a reread, and: foreshadowing
Swirl
2021-11-22 09:20:42 +0000 UTCI'm totally on board with that idea. XD
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-08 18:28:45 +0000 UTCThe blurred edges work pretty well, I think. Also you gave us both Frisk & Asriel sticking their tongues out in the last panel, so the bottom half already closes strong. :P
Daishi
2019-02-04 03:29:25 +0000 UTCA part of me really hopes Papyrus always brings a spare pair of cool sunglasses for emergencies such as these XD
Jeeley
2019-02-03 17:40:18 +0000 UTCOh no worries! I always appreciate your input. Unfortunately time wouldn't let me make any big changes to help the bottom half. I guess I just wanted to make them look like separate memories, heh. Maybe I may revisit this page later. But thank you again for your comments!
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-03 16:27:00 +0000 UTCHaha, thank you!
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-03 16:21:46 +0000 UTCMan this whole thing is just cuteness on a page.
Zw
2019-02-02 18:28:09 +0000 UTCPerhaps having more nebulous borders would work, yea. Or like, blurring the edges between the various images? I dunno, I think the effort put into making it look like a collage worked *too* well, and now it actually looks like various pictures taken and pasted in a scrapbook, heh. Sorry I don't have much else, I thought the photograph thing was what you were going for. xD
Daishi
2019-02-01 05:48:25 +0000 UTCHaha, yes, everything seems to be going pretty good so far.
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-01 05:33:53 +0000 UTCHeh, thanks!
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-01 05:15:08 +0000 UTCheh heh. Thank you for the kind comments! I'm unsure I understand what you mean about the pictures. I didn't intend to make them look like they were all pictures being taken, but now that I look at it, I suppose it does look like that, haha. Hmm, perhaps I could change the solid border around them? To make them look a little less like pictures being taken. Anyway, thank you very much for your input!
AbsoluteDream
2019-02-01 05:14:59 +0000 UTCAww yeah, playing montage! Catching snowflakes with your tongue is one of the cutest things to ever blep. Extra points for Frisk's look of *concern* when Papyrus picks up the snowball.
Myshu
2019-01-31 20:19:06 +0000 UTCAww! Sans looks so adorable in the last panel!
A_Xenomorph
2019-01-29 02:54:32 +0000 UTCYou're going to tease us with all this excellent fluffy kids being kids (don't think I didn't see what you did) and make me real sad when it gets torn away. I think the various pictures of things they're doing might benefit with some level of integration into what the cast is doing, too? I suppose it just seems odd that only one of the pictures acknowledges that these are actual pictures being taken, heh. Greatly entertained by MK having no issue skating, while Az looks pretty out of his element. Also, Papyrus getting in on throwing snowballs is a great way to subvert reader expectation, haha.
Daishi
2019-01-28 22:57:57 +0000 UTC
