OTV: Chapter 2: Page 57
Added 2018-12-24 11:34:11 +0000 UTCHere we go, chapter 2! Should be interesting! (I head canon Grillby as selectively mute, and prefers to use hand signs to communicate, except for those he's closest to. I also head canon that Papyrus likes dinosaur sprinkles.)
I flopped around quite a bit with the dialogue here. Papyrus tends to have pretty wordy dialogue, heh. Hope this doesn't look too crowded!
I also just realized that I need to get at least two pages ahead within the next month since I'm going for surgery early February, and I won't be doing much of anything for a couple weeks, haha. We'll see how far ahead I can get!
Comments
Aw thanks! ^^
AbsoluteDream
2019-01-02 21:01:59 +0000 UTCOooh, cool detail for the river reflections!
Jeeley
2019-01-02 20:37:54 +0000 UTCHmm, Perhaps.
AbsoluteDream
2019-01-02 18:50:06 +0000 UTCis that an...! u n d e r s w a p r e f e r e n c e ?
bluberry2600xx
2019-01-02 04:48:35 +0000 UTCHaha, gotta love Papyrus. XD
AbsoluteDream
2019-01-02 04:48:25 +0000 UTCAhaha, "ON WE PRESS" cracked me up. I love how Papyrus can railroad a conversation when he needs to.
Myshu
2018-12-30 03:03:40 +0000 UTCPfff, Bagsriel. XD And thank you!
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-26 20:36:54 +0000 UTCThank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-26 20:36:22 +0000 UTCHaha, I wonder how many of these characters have dreamt about their own AUs?
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-26 20:36:09 +0000 UTCOh yes, it's nothing to worry about. ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-26 20:34:51 +0000 UTCThank you very much! Papyrus likes to talk a lot, but I always love hearing what he has to say, heh. I'm glad it's not too much of an issue here.
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-26 20:33:21 +0000 UTCI'm a fan of papyrus being simultaneously the jubilant juvenile he is, but still socially aware of people - basically not a dummy, just someone who sees the best in things. Wordy dialogue is only an issue if it doesn't pertain to what's going on, so it seems fine here.
Daishi
2018-12-24 23:41:17 +0000 UTCWhat's the surgery for if I may ask? Are you okay?
Bla Bla
2018-12-24 21:31:05 +0000 UTCMonster Kid already making AUs lol
A_Xenomorph
2018-12-24 18:15:09 +0000 UTCHope everything goes well with the surgery!
Zw
2018-12-24 17:43:21 +0000 UTCThe continuing adventures of Bagsriel XD And best of luck in the New Year D:
Jeeley
2018-12-24 15:06:35 +0000 UTCYep, he's pretty good at it. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-12-24 14:35:21 +0000 UTCPapyrus, master of evading risky topics xD
StrikeYoko
2018-12-24 14:09:28 +0000 UTC
