OTV: Chapter 1: Page 46
Added 2018-10-20 02:53:55 +0000 UTC(What's this? The page is already finished? Before Thursday? XD Hopefully this means I can get another page done this coming week! I might actually use Daishi's advice and edit the font/text later to better convey emotions. ^^)
Asriel isn't doing so well. Frisk is obviously concerned. D:
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Indeed they do! I also attempted to do a simplified version of the other mug for Asriel, heh.
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-26 01:17:25 +0000 UTCNo! D:
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-26 01:16:18 +0000 UTCNope, Frisk does not give up easily. Thank you! ^^
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-26 01:16:05 +0000 UTCNext page is up! XD At least, a WIP of it!
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-26 01:15:42 +0000 UTCUrg the wait is agonizing. LOL
Bla Bla
2018-10-24 20:03:03 +0000 UTCAww, but it's not in Frisk's nature to leave alone! Great page, and a very nice little dose of freaky-shiz to catch the reader's attention. Excited for (and dreading) what's ahead!
Myshu
2018-10-23 02:16:40 +0000 UTCAsriel - "Frisk...I don't feel so good..."
Retro Fluff
2018-10-21 20:19:15 +0000 UTCDoes Frisk have a Grillby's mug?
Jeeley
2018-10-21 12:21:44 +0000 UTCIt would indeed be very tough to deal with. I tend to add details to all of the characters for more... visual interest? It's also how I like to interpret them. Like how I add gills for Undyne, or scales for Alphys. Uh, other than just my personal preference, there really isn't much of a reason for the differences. ^^; I just want to make them fun to draw for myself, since I'll be drawing them a lot. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-21 03:28:12 +0000 UTCHe needs one. D:
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-21 03:23:06 +0000 UTCXD
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-21 03:22:50 +0000 UTCPfff, I did in fact colour them pink. XD
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-21 03:22:26 +0000 UTCHe could definitely use one. D:
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-21 03:22:05 +0000 UTCOh man, now that you've updated this, the tears that asriel has provide a perfect opportunity for emotional font, haha. So like, ya know how undyne the undying has the wavering text as she's on the edge of disintegration, right? Same concept, but modified depending on the situation! Glad to see you were able to make a bunch of progress in such a short time! :D
Daishi
2018-10-21 02:41:54 +0000 UTCAnd it begins. ): I hate the idea that he has the flower form as a constant reminder. ): If I may ask a question, why do you draw Asriel differently from how he looks in the game? In the game the Dreemuurs don't have claws on their fingers nor do they have pads on their hands and feet. They look more Human in the actual game than they do here.
Bla Bla
2018-10-21 01:55:01 +0000 UTCI wanna give Asriel a hug ;w;
Cassidy Quill Waters
2018-10-21 01:36:33 +0000 UTCHIS SHIRT HAS TURNED YELLOW! WHAT COULD THIS SYMBOLIZE? ALL THE THEORI- oh it's his pajamas.
bluberry2600xx
2018-10-21 01:17:55 +0000 UTC*floral fury intensifies*
bluberry2600xx
2018-10-20 12:09:34 +0000 UTCHeh, I wonder if Frisk's slippers will be pink after a certain someone XD
Jeeley
2018-10-20 10:06:07 +0000 UTCNuuuuuu protect the goat boi!!! I want to hug him so bad ;w;
StrikeYoko
2018-10-20 09:21:46 +0000 UTCThat's definitely a good idea! I'll have to look up some examples to see what might work best for what emotions.
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-20 04:27:10 +0000 UTCany thoughts on using alternate fonts to indicate emotions? Here it's pretty obvious how asriel feels, but what about frisk? In my head the second time they call out for asriel it's softer, since they realize he's not in a good mental state, but using a droopy font or something might help convey that in a more apparent way. I'm sad, Frisk had better have some excellent hug technique. :3
Daishi
2018-10-20 03:14:16 +0000 UTCIndeed! D:
AbsoluteDream
2018-10-20 03:08:01 +0000 UTCmmmm how's about no, silly gotebro? Ain't no point being family without being there in the bad times. :(
Daishi
2018-10-20 03:04:58 +0000 UTC
