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MLP - Concept 2 for the Twilestia comic

Added 2017-11-03 11:53:10 +0000 UTC

I've finished my homework, so I can have fun making more drawings.

This is something I've made this morning in 30 min. It's a sketch for the Twilestia comic I want to make. There are some scratches that are supposed to be clothes. Celestia has a one-piece swimsuit covering her hips and Twilight still has this maid skirt. I don't know if it's noticeable, but Celestia is playing with the nipple of Twilight's left boob.

One thing I don't personally like about it is that the poses are not very interesting. They look very stiff, like the Equestria Girls animations xD. I think the poses are not interesting because I was focusing on the facial expressions and the size of their boobs. The comic will have more dynamic poses.

Speaking about the comic, some weeks ago I've posted the structure of it and I've received some interesting suggestions. I like most of them, but I think I'll make a couple of changes I've made in the first place because I don't think it would be interesting or very appealing. I'll redesign the structure with the additions from the patrons and I'll explain the changes in the process.

You might know that the whole scene will be a balcony from Celestia's personal room, so I think I'll add details like a swimming pool, one of these big chairs and probably a piano. Just little details so the scene wouldn't be too tiring for the view.

I'm working on the next drawing and the next ones will be the suggestions from the last poll. I'll make them this weekend to gain some time.

I accept more suggestions for the Twilestia comic. Write a comment right here or send me a message if you want to suggest something.

Thank you for your support!

Love,
RT