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Song Demo: It Happens So Fast (Sunday Vibes Reloaded)

Daily update is coming later, but here's a vocal version/also improved beat of the sunday vibes song. Hope you like it!

The lyrics are still a bit cheesy/verse is just mumbles so gonna look it over but right now:

Verse:

Sunset, and you are next to me, I'm

Wondering (mumbles..)

Chorus:

Oh, wish I could be here forever

Oh, wish that this moment would last, but it happens so fast, yeah

Comments

Gorgeous! Simply stunning <3

Jessistache_73

I like it a lot !!!

Magalie Leplus

Love it, love the belting. Can't wait to hear where it goes. :)

Amberlash

Love the lyrics!!๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿฅฐ

Bookdragon 43

Love it, your voice is amazing ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ

Karmas05

Just absolutely love it!!!! The gentle echos of you in the chorus is perfect. The melody is so very dream like and not over bearing in the lyrics....which are very nice. The vibe is so wonderful and floating. I don't know how to say this, but on a cloud holding your hand kind of feel. So wonderful, thank you for the little glimpse. Would love to hear more, please.โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Gayle

๐Ÿ˜† I was hearing that word as โ€˜sundressโ€™ ๐Ÿ‘—

emy

This is my favorite so far! New ringtone ๐Ÿ˜

Sugary Magnolia

Sounds like quite many is having problems leaving this song to be, glad I'm not alone ๐Ÿคช I feel lucky that I can loop this while working, at least some perks in a boring office job ๐Ÿ˜

JustSomeJK

The forevers are what got me. Yeah, just one more listen and Iโ€™ll get back to work. ๐Ÿ˜›

Dorie

Ok, one more ๐Ÿคฃ Goodnight to u too ๐Ÿ˜Š I wish I could crawl into bed now too for a nap ๐Ÿ˜ด

JustSomeJK

Okay, I will ๐Ÿ˜‚ just one more listen ๐ŸŽง ๐Ÿ˜ด

Aubrey Danielle

Aubrey, you too! It's late for u as well, so go to bed ๐Ÿ˜‚ But yeah I agree, such a great song in the making ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ”ฅ

JustSomeJK

*spank* ๐Ÿคฃ I have it on repeat too. Wish it was a full song already ๐Ÿคฉ like woah ๐Ÿคฏ ๐Ÿ”ฅ ๐Ÿ˜‚

Aubrey Danielle

Someone is probably going to spank me for spamming with this second comment ๐Ÿ˜ But I have now been listening to this demo "couple" of times ๐Ÿซฃ on my headphones at work and had to come back to say that I'm obsessed about the ends of those OHs! The creek, fry or whatever that is called is so cool in your voice! (Please someone tell me the correct term for it, I suck at the musical terms and it annoys the heck out of me when I can't describe what I mean correctly ๐Ÿ˜…) Also that "belting" really hits a sweet spot! I like that build up and contrast a lot. Wish this song would last forever, but the demo ends so fast๐Ÿ˜‹๐ŸŽถ๐Ÿฅฐ There's some cheese for ya ๐Ÿคช Yeah if it ain't clear yet, I really wish u would finish this, I would like to hear this as a summer hit on a radio (well basically on Spotify, 'cos I don't listen to the radio, but u get the point)๐Ÿ™‚ Goodnight ๐Ÿ™‚ Hopefully u are in fact sleeping already, it's late in there ๐Ÿ˜…

JustSomeJK

The mumbled 'wondering' sounds a bit like 'undressed' and for a second there I was thinking you're turning it into a spicy ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐Ÿคญsong hihi

Nataliekey

Omg I love it!

Calize

Really enjoying the beat now, itโ€™s giving Anti Hero vibes and that song is an absolute BOP! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป Gonna be dancing to this all day now ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿป

Jen ๐Ÿฆ™

Guitars.. or a synth.. or drum somethingโ€ฆ more.. deeper pulse.. I thinkโ€ฆ if thatโ€™s the route that fits the rest of the lyrics.. itโ€™ll give it a more late 80s vibe though, so gotta be careful with teetering that line to not feel dated

Airyckah Lane

i love this. you sound great and itโ€™s such a cool vibe, love it love it bruhhh

xtina ๐Ÿ–ค

I like it! I don't know, but it makes me feel happy just listening to it, put me in a good mood ๐Ÿ˜Š

Phoebe Grint

we're doing a video each that go up the same day. Yeah I'm gonna keep looking at the verse, I do like that it's more low key tho, I think that's why so many are reacting strongly to the contrast into the chorus :)

Joel Berghult

hmm I don't even remember the anti hero beat, this is a pretty standard type beat hehe. I added a coupe extra bass drum hits tho

Joel Berghult

I think it already is pretty energetic but maybe some more guitars :)

Joel Berghult

Awww I like the lyrics, they're sweet

Miriam

Ohhhhh I like ๐Ÿ˜

Lisa Jasperson

The rolling bass has me like ๐ŸŒŸโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ๐Ÿงกโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐ŸŒŸ This is excellent!! You are really on to something good here.. the foundation if a hitโ€ฆ so you BETTER finish this one!!! PLEASE ๐Ÿ˜Š

TR

The cheesier the better! Love it โค๏ธ

Alle Engdahl

It's amazing how much that tweaking of the beat changes, it still has that really nice hopeful vibe, but now it's softer summer romance vibe ๐Ÿ™‚ I like it a lot so far! Your vocals sound really good ๐ŸŽถ๐Ÿฅฐ It was nice to wake up for this day with this demo ๐Ÿ˜Š

JustSomeJK

The chorus sounds really good ๐Ÿ‘ it will be a great song !

Emmanuelle

Itโ€™s not fairrrr but itโ€™s amazing ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

Aubrey Danielle

Wow that is so catchy. Love it.

Melinda Young

You are such a great singer

Stephanie Bruso

Same! ๐Ÿฅถ

emy

Oof!! This chorus is one of those moments where you get shivers and then you keep getting shivers with every big chord lmao. I really like the way the verse melody fits together with that bass too - both lines are so easy on the ears, I love this ๐Ÿ™Œ

emy

Sorry for not having any smart ass comments to add. I'll do better next time. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฅบ ๐Ÿ˜œ

Dannielle O'Neill

DUUUUUUDE! THAT is such a summer vibe song!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEAAAASE take this as a WAY huge great thing when I say it's that cheesy sunny day, running into the sunset music. (I'm cheesy, ok. I own it.)

Dannielle O'Neill

This either needs to be played during a slow dance or as a summer montage in a movie, I love it.

PigeonMilk_216

I think you nailed the chorus. I'm not sure about the verse and how this will build but I trust you will figure it out along with the gorgonzola. I might write more but I am too busy memeing your twerking. Are you and Trey each doing a video or will there be one competition video?

Cas

How is he SO GOOD AT THIS

Shauna

Ooohhmmmaaagawd ๐Ÿค— The drum beat reminds me of something else, maybe Taylor Swift Anti Hero? I was listening to it quietly at the same time as my partner started snoring.... I could be very wrong! ๐Ÿ˜‚ I do like the lyrics so far ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Clair (Teampanda)

Love the vibe and the lyrics too. That chorus took me by surprise in the best way. Your vocalsโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ’•

Dorie

Wow. I love this.

DiamondK Zee

Wowโ€ฆthis sounds amazing so far, Joel!! Iโ€™m really excited to hear the finished song. Hopefully this song wonโ€™t get put on the back burner. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป The beat is great, and your voice is definitely ear candy!! You are an incredible person!! Do you know that?! ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ’œ

Melissa Rogers

I got chills ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ

Aubrey Danielle

Holy ๐Ÿ’ฉ this is good ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

Aubrey Danielle

Oohhhh I like! Plan on kicking it up a bit after that first chorus? Or keeping the slow dance vibe throughout? I think either fits nicely.. but there was amazing build up that kicking it up there would just build great for a nice soft drop at the bridge

Airyckah Lane

your vocals slay in this and you can definitely hear your improvement! I think the lyrics sound good so far! ๐Ÿค—

Mari

You hit some killer notes in this one!

Becky Lorion

Even if you do say if all mumbles, cheesy imo I feel like it fits very well with this song vibes, and your voice tone, quality & such! Lol yeah I'm music nerd too!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽผ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ

CK DeP

The chorus vocal hit and my mind went ๐Ÿคฏ I love this!

Shauna


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