Natural Beauty - Page 18 (Finale)
Added 2026-02-11 20:13:06 +0000 UTC
Comments
Kind of a sad ending but was really nice comic overall. Cant wait for more stuff from you!
Fabi Stang
2026-02-12 16:09:32 +0000 UTCThank you. Having such a narrow way to retell a complex story (my interpretation of it at least) is quite tricky. I'm so glad you were able to enjoy it despite some of the different themes. Thank you for your detailed feedback as always. This sort of stuff is the most rewarding thing about putting my content out there, so honestly, thank you.
TheAltrApp
2026-02-12 09:17:49 +0000 UTCBeautifully rendered and told in the single images! As story tributes you really glow for, yes again please :) Grasping the narrative took some time as much was just hinted and the scenes occurred as temporal jumps. That artifice forced a reread of the complete story to get the whole experience – which worked well in the end. As the story was a beautiful but total focus on the main character, the interactions with the world and other characters were sadly only incidental like that. You definitely have a thing for darker stories and I agree some tension/drama/ups and downs are the spice of a good story. Definitely glad you shipped around the body horror elements, though. For my part, whole personality rewriting or domination/enslavement are not something I am interested in, which luckily was only brushed here. Only thing that I missed was more diverse changes/ups and downs as she quickly was straight on her way into perfection or whatever the company/customers decided this should be.
Jakken Haggar
2026-02-12 08:40:13 +0000 UTCI'm gonna read it and get back to you. ;)
TheAltrApp
2026-02-12 05:04:57 +0000 UTCI do have a suggestion that might be appealing to you (not a novel but a very short story). It's one of my all time favs for transformation stories. Bethany's Bracelet https://mcstories.com/BethanysBracelet/BethanysBracelet.html Thought about making images for it myself for years now, but I'm still learning art.
Gooobooo
2026-02-12 04:56:27 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it. The ending to the original story is pretty grim as well.
TheAltrApp
2026-02-12 04:29:42 +0000 UTCThat's a little sad, but a good story nonetheless.
Bruxius
2026-02-12 04:27:16 +0000 UTCI'm glad you enjoyed it. I can totally understand why it would be a little confusing initially but I'm glad it all came together in the end! 😁 My version follows the book very closely up until the point where she asks her boss for more money. In the original version she does end up working for a high class brother called "apothecary" but what happens there is much more sinister and involves more of a body horror element which ultimately results in many of the characters dying and the main character becoming horrible transformed into a type of monster. This is also due to her ceasing all the treatments and her body reacting in an unexpected way due to her DNA being altered. It's quite difficult to explain but I definitely recommend to read the book if you have an interest.
TheAltrApp
2026-02-12 04:23:58 +0000 UTCLoved it, I was a little confused at first but rereading it as a whole it's a lot clearer now (I looked at the description of the book too wondering what changed in your version, the reviews mention body horror a lot).
Gooobooo
2026-02-12 04:17:58 +0000 UTCHonestly looking how she looks I’m not surprised of how people really can’t get enough of her. A brilliant story I’m sad to see it end but if you’re feeling inclined I’d love to see a pin up. As for books that involve transformations I haven’t read any that isn’t obvious or super appealing as they don’t focus on the transformation like you did here. Marvelous work
W0RR13Z
2026-02-11 22:57:08 +0000 UTC
