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50 Shades Script Doctor (preview)

Here are the first 5ish minutes of my next vid! This one will probably be around 20 minutes long, and it was a real challenge to pick just 10 problems with the story.

50 Shades Script Doctor (preview)

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"How to fix 50 Shades Darker" by Jenny Nicholson--"trash the script, get rid of the main actor, and make his replacement a train collector". I love it!

Sean Zoltek

I think they have some problems with emails. I just received VAT invoice with $0 VAT, yet they billed me with it.

Duszy

OK, I lughed through most of this. I haven't seen the movie. I sort of want to now and then apply the fixes to the movie while watching it. Like "Where is that train room!?!" Also, wanted to ask. I got a weird email from patron that said my funding didnt go through. A day later I got another email that said funding went through. Did anyone else have that happen?

I am a slow learner.

Abel Cassius

I wish you understood the words sarcasm and joke as well as you understand the word misogyny.

Veterans Art Therapy

I don't think mysoginistic means what you think it means. <a href="https://youtu.be/8xejHHbaEt8?t=5m23s" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://youtu.be/8xejHHbaEt8?t=5m23s</a> oops?

Abel Cassius

She's a grown woman she can talk about all the spankings she wants it's her right to be spanked as a matter of fact if Jenny needs a spanking I'll volunteer to give Duszy welcome to 2017 where Jenny can have all the spankings she wants. (So many misogynistic pricks on the net you go girl)

Veterans Art Therapy

Ok, i don't know what's creepier. That you watched this movie, with enough interest to think about fixing it, or that you talk about spanking, bdsm, etc. with the little bb-8 in background. Did you at least cover his audio sensors? Or do you really want to end up with white-orange version of this interrogation droid from ep IV ?

Duszy

Cross Christian Gray with Sheldon Cooper yes that's how you make a self centered egotist be likable get the Big Bang Theory writers in on 50 Shades of Sheldon Cooper

Veterans Art Therapy

Ok you can have Superman but he isn't exactly warm or happy, not in Superman lol

Veterans Art Therapy

Superman's 50 shades of Kal El featuring Wonder Woman's lasso of truth lol kidding

Veterans Art Therapy

Awesome

Veterans Art Therapy


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