Milkshake Makeovers: A Hucow Story
Added 2023-03-02 22:19:33 +0000 UTCLaura hates her job at Beef Burgers, so she has little patience for blowhards who come in right at closing, even if they're the company owner carrying a weird box. Gathered up for a supposed taste test of new milkshakes, the night shift of Beef Burgers soon finds themselves in milky mischief.
Hi all. A quick one shot to start off March. Happy Reading!
Comments
I resisted the urge to include a section detailing how Bertram was working with the mystery guy from the Pucklebirch stories. Wanted to keep things focused in scope until I clear all the other scattering plot threads/stories.
Quixerotic
2023-03-03 13:52:31 +0000 UTCI liked it but I got a really Mooful MILF MILK deja vu vibe reading it. I like the transformations and perspectives. Bertram felt Saturday morning cartoon villain-ish. He's there to cause chaos but gets easily lost and forgotten. I would have liked him to have stuck around and watched the show or divulged his master plan to change the Burger joint into a MILFshake Strip club. Also would love to know what flavor he drank before showing up cause portly fellow had to have had one for himself.
Red Panda Seven
2023-03-03 05:42:04 +0000 UTC
