Carousel Book Eight, Chapter 59
Added 2026-02-25 03:48:42 +0000 UTCComments
This comment just jutted onto my feed.
Bobby Thom
2026-02-26 16:55:47 +0000 UTCGotta love a bit of body horror. By the way, 'jutted' is used incorrectly- you might want to use 'shot up'. To jut up is to stick out of something; the rock jutted out of the water, the ferry jutted out into the water, etc. Whereas saying 'Anna shot up', it's grammatically correct, makes sense, and is a pretty explosive visual.
David B.
2026-02-26 15:56:00 +0000 UTCI would have laughed if Riley agreed with Anna when she said it wasn't in. I feel like that would have put the audience (the fake audience, not us) at ease. Tho obv riley probs isn't that kind of character
Sartrina
2026-02-25 19:41:42 +0000 UTCGreat ch, showing us another slightly different facet of Carousel
Gorane
2026-02-25 13:52:24 +0000 UTCNice chapter and monster Typos: "but it wasn't just to me." 'to' could either be removed or replaced with 'made of' "bones and soles" is probably souls?
Warren (Stephen) Rose
2026-02-25 04:57:47 +0000 UTCThis was a great chapter!
jacob joseph
2026-02-25 04:46:26 +0000 UTCLol the hags having a day. First some one who was dead but "alive" now someone who she can't kill.
JAMAJ
2026-02-25 04:33:35 +0000 UTC
