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Tistow - 60 - revisal

I hope you'll find this interesting!

I mentioned before we were gonna pass the text for page 60 before releasing it, but both agreed we didn't like the flow. It didn't carry Jack's anger over to the next two pages. The scene is still the same as planned, but we've revised it a little. And I hope it'll flow better now.

Tistow - 60 - revisal

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