NYS2 Page 25 (Done)
Added 2018-06-27 21:48:30 +0000 UTCI meant to have this one done sooner, but I had a hard time with the dialogue. I really love how the second and third panels turned out though! <3
This will be Patreon exclusive for today, and I'll post it up tomorrow!
Comments
"Intruder Sperm-missiles Detected. Load up Defense Program, Missile Command."
DC_OZ
2018-06-30 01:57:40 +0000 UTCinb4 Marm complain comment.
2018-06-28 01:37:36 +0000 UTCHmm.... I can see there is still some semblance of the difficulty with the dialogue. "Just as well have more loads to give." Feels like a thought unfinished as the next line feels divorced from the comment/thought. Still, good page. Wonder where it will go next.
Reiku Yin
2018-06-28 00:53:01 +0000 UTCOh my word I think I'm getting the vapors. <3
Azura
2018-06-28 00:09:18 +0000 UTCThe dialog flows well. You mind sharing what gave you difficulty on it? The panels look great as usual though. X3
gunstar_1
2018-06-27 22:51:49 +0000 UTCI came hard...I need to stay in my car for a while...
Animeplayer
2018-06-27 22:33:28 +0000 UTC
