Chapter 1214 - Wine Bottle of Beer
Added 2025-09-23 11:10:17 +0000 UTCThe Viper was silent for several moments as he considered Jake’s question before he spoke.
“Again, that’s a complicated question,” the Viper said, less jokingly this time around. “I would say, considering everything, you did very well. It was your first time teaching a class like that, and you got through it pretty decently, and the students left the auditorium having been bettered from the experience. Shit, based on how a few of them even leveled up, they even got literal experience.”
“You said it’s complicated, which makes me think that isn’t all you have to say,” Jake pointed out.
“True,” the Viper nodded, though he didn’t seem intent on elaborating.
“Fine… give it to be straight. How did I actually do?” Jake sighed.
“As I said, you actually did well,” the Viper reiterated. “But it’s all relative. From an objective standpoint, if we compare you to other teachers around peak C-grade who usually do this kind of thing, your lesson was… well, let’s just be honest here, absolute dogshit.”
“Ow,” Jake muttered, having seen that one coming. “But definitely do give me some feedback about just how horrible I was.”
“Again, don’t get me wrong and become all discouraged; this is comparing you to those who do this for a living,” Villy said in a calming tone. “But there were some obvious objective shortcomings. Your time management was less-than-ideal, you had way too many examples, you should probably have included some written material to hand out, you repeated yourself a lot, a lot of stiffness in there, and… eh, no reason to harp on. Though I will point out that perhaps worst of all was that you focused way too much on those who couldn’t follow along to the detriment of those who were keeping up.”
Jake frowned at the last one the Viper mentioned. “What do you mean? Shouldn’t I want to try to make sure everyone is involved and getting something out of the lesson?”
“No,” the Viper said, recoiling at the notion. “Fuck no. Don’t waste your time on the idiots in the audience, but focus on those who are doing well. You kept trying to catch up to those behind rather than further accelerating those already up to speed. If people can’t keep up, that’s just because they’re either too stupid or the topic doesn’t suit their Path; in either case, it’s not your problem. Sure, it’s bad if no one can keep up, but if at least a couple are capable, they should have the vast majority of your focus.”
“That… kind of goes against good teaching practices from my understanding,” Jake muttered.
“This isn’t the Holy Church,” Villy shook his head. “Those left in the dust are to be walked past or trampled. No one should waste their time trying to pick them up and carry others, as that would only slow them down. Of course, the hope is that those who’ve fallen will stand up on their own and keep marching, but if they lack the will to do so, they aren’t worth anyone’s time.”
“… what happened to No Child Left Behind?” Jake asked semi-jokingly.
“Children aren’t enrolled in the Academy in the first place,” Villy answered in a deadpan tone.
“Fair enough, I guess,” Jake sighed. He still wasn’t entirely on board with what Villy said, but he understood the logic. The Order preferred to focus on those already standing out to help uplift them further, even if it came at the cost of those who were struggling.
Culturally, based on his life before the system, Jake found this a questionable approach, but he knew that was how the majority of factions liked to do things, and he reckoned they knew more than him when it came to nurturing talent. Only the Holy Church had a policy of trying to help everyone, but even that had its limits and was ultimately only implemented due to the existence of the Holyland, allowing these weaker individuals to still contribute to the Church as a whole.
Besides, Jake didn’t really have much to say, considering he was one of the main beneficiaries of the Order’s system.
“So, seeing as you didn’t fuck up entirely, how about making this a regular thing so-“
“Fuck off,” Jake scoffed.
“Just a suggestion,” the Viper grinned, clearly enjoying teasing Jake.
“It also took so much damn time to prepare,” Jake sighed.
“Yeah, that’s another point of criticism that I didn’t really see the need to include, seeing as it was your first time. You spent way too much prep time, but again, if you decided to teach more regularly, you would inevitably get more efficient,” Villy said with a smile. “I also can’t say you wasted your time, seeing as spending a month to prepare to get a level while closing in on peak C-grade is pretty damn good.”
“Definitely getting closer to maxing out the profession,” Jake nodded, having nine levels left of C-grade. His class still needed nearly double that, but from experience, it leveled a lot faster than his alchemy.
Especially if he included a cheeky little dragon hunt in there.
“For sure,” the Viper nodded in agreement as he turned a bit more serious. “Now, I do have a small confession to make. I wasn’t so insistent on making you do this lesson just because I thought it would be good for you – which it was – but I also had some ulterior motives.”
“What, record it to bully me in the future?” asked jokingly, having definitely not read the mood right.
“No, to try to sniff out the people behind the ambush in the void,” the snake god said, not a hint of jest in his voice.
“Oh...” Jake muttered as he thought about it a little more. “Wait, why would someone involved in that participate in the lesson? That just seems to be needlessly risky.”
“It’s a long shot, but there is a chance that...”
Villy proceeded to explain his thoughts about the other party wanting to confirm Jake wasn’t injured, as well as some other rather loose reasons, and overall, Jake found the reasoning seriously questionable. But... he also understood that they really didn’t have anything else to go off, and while he had zero faith in this leading to anything, he didn’t see any harm in it. Well, besides completely stomping over the privacy of every single participant in Jake’s lesson.
When the Viper was done, Jake thought for a while before asking:
“So, you've noticed anyone suspicious yet? I didn’t see anything off on my end or had any weird feelings from anyone during the lesson, but I’m also fully aware that my nerves were tense and I wasn’t exactly paying attention,” Jake said.
He also didn’t even question why the Viper hadn’t told him about this plan beforehand, as he fully understood. If Jake had been told this was also part of a plot to try to find a spy from an unknown, powerful faction, he would have been even more stressed out and nervous, and he seriously didn’t need that.
“Nope,” the Viper shook his head. “But I didn’t expect to either. Clearly, whatever method this faction is using doesn’t allow us to easily spot those part of it. The Pantheon of Life didn’t notice they had spies among them, even if they were mortals, so I would have been highly surprised if there was anything detectable to identify them. No, I think the best way is to monitor every single person part of the lesson and see if they do anything suspicious.”
“Hopefully, it leads to something,” Jake sighed.
“But even if it doesn’t, this was still a good idea,” Villy grinned. “Anyway, don’t think too much about it; this is way beyond your pay grade. Just focus on gaining levels and finishing up your preparations for your upcoming evolution.”
“That was the plan,” Jake nodded.
“Oh, and to reward your efforts, I’m even throwing in a small treat,” the god said, leaning forward. “To fulfill your dreams of hunting down a dragon, I’ll help you locate one. A proper True Dragon at that. I already know you wouldn’t be a fan of just attacking some random dragon just out shopping for the family, so I’ll make sure to find one you’ll have no moral quarrels killing. Likely even one that the Dragonflight the dragon belongs to will be happy you killed it for them, as they really hate taking down their own, no matter how much they act out.”
“That... would be kind of awesome,” Jake said, having kind of forgotten to bring up the topic with Villy the last few times they met.
As the god said, while Jake wanted to hunt a True Dragon, he didn’t just want it to be any True Dragon. Most of them were part of the major factions and posed no problems at all, but were simply going about their lives. Even if Jake ignored that it would feel wrong to hunt down someone like that, it would also create needless conflict with whichever Dragonflight the dragon belonged to if Jake decided to randomly kill one of its members.
“Great, I’ll have some people look into it,” the Viper nodded. “It shouldn’t take that long, but it’s not like we’re in that much of a rush seeing the latest bane poison you crafted.”
“Well, someone did delay me by a month or so,” Jake shot back.
“And got another level for it,” Villy pointed out. “And trust me, you’ll need everything you can get. Even if we find a dragon that’s as weak as they come, you’ll still be facing a True Dragon. The weakest of their kind isn’t something a C-grade usually has any hope of facing under usual circumstances, so I am a little interested to see how you’ll do.”
“The power of a True Dragon is exactly why I want to face one, and let’s be honest, if I wait till after I evolve, a similarly leveled True Dragon won’t be a problem unless they’re a truly outstanding member of their race,” Jake said.
“True enough,” Villy fully agreed. “Hence why I’m not trying to dissuade you but just reminding you to make all the necessary preparations.”
Jake nodded as he was reminded of something else. “Speaking of... if I want to craft a bane poison, I’ll need dragon parts. Some blood and scales should be good, however, what I really want is some of their more valuable parts, like a heart or some Record-infused bones, but I was told stuff like that is not easily accessible on the open market.”
“No, again, the Dragonflights get a bit touchy when it comes to killing their kind, and they’re not a fan of people trading the body parts of their slain kin, which, to be fair, is perfectly understandable. I’d guess you would also feel weird about people selling human parts for alchemy.”
“Honestly? Not really,” Jake shrugged. “I would find it weird as fuck, but I wouldn’t really care that much.”
“Oh, let me change what I said,” Villy said. “Body parts of your fellow Earthlings, specifically, which are all sold as delicacies for expensive prices, with the parts of your closest friends and family fetching the highest price. You know, seeing as you’re close to the strongest people from your planet, and the parts of the strongest fetch the best price.”
“Yeah, alright, I would probably end up killing a lot of people,” Jake confessed. “Do the dragons really have that much kinship?”
“Oh, big time,” the snake god nodded. “Amongst their own Dragonflight, anyway. Most True Dragons in a local area also tend to know each other by name due to their rarity, which is why I said it may take a little while to find one for you to hunt. It will need to be a truly ostracized True Dragon.”
“How about a True Dragon that naturally evolved and has yet to become a part of a Dragonflight?” Jake wondered. “Or perhaps a variant that doesn’t quite belong to any particular Dragonflight in the first place.”
The Malefic Viper looked at Jake with a deadpan expression. “Oh, those do exist... and they would all absolutely slaughter you in a fight, no matter what preparations you made. These are monsters who’ve grown up through slaughter and gained incredible power on the way, true geniuses of their kind. I’m not saying they’re on your level, far from it, but that doesn’t mean they’re to be underestimated. No, a regular True Dragon that’s already weak for its kind is the only realistic target.”
Jake wanted to argue, but ultimately had to nod in agreement. The reason he wanted to fight a True Dragon in the first place was precisely due to how famously powerful they were, so it would be realistic for him to want to fight one while still a grade below.
Having clearly noticed Jake’s initial reaction to protest, the Viper continued. “How often do you think C-grades manage to hunt down True Dragons?”
“I would guess pretty rarely,” Jake shrugged, not sure where the Viper was going with that question.
“Right... now, how often do you think mortals kill gods?”
“Even more rarely?”
“Right again,” the Malefic Viper smiled devilishly as he leaned forward. “Now, if we adjust for the disparity in numbers and just focus on the success rate, how do you think the numbers look?”
“I have a strong feeling they won’t be as I assume,” Jake said with a frown.
“You’re so smart,” Villy said in a jokingly mocking tone. “My point is that for a C-grade to hunt down a True Dragon isn’t that much different from a mortal S-grade trying to kill a god. Both are feats of incredible arrogance and an impossibility in the eyes of most.”
Now it was Jake’s turn to stare at the Viper with a deadpan expression. “You don’t need to try to convince me; I was already going to do it.”
Villy chuckled at Jake’s answer as he shook his head. “I’ll pass along your demand for draconic materials and try to find suitable prey for you. As I said, for now, focus on your own work. Oh, and I’ll keep you updated on the void ambushers if we find out anything. Assuming I find it beneficial to let you know. If not, I’ll keep it a secret and tell you at some later time.”
“Yeah, yeah,” Jake waved off the god as Villy gave him a final wave before disappearing, leaving Jake alone back in his residence once more. He didn’t really have to think that much about his talk with the Viper, but instead used it as pure motivation for what he had to do next.
After emptying his wine bottle of beer, Jake headed straight to the laboratory, where it was time to really get into the weeds again and continue working on that bane poison while meditating and slowly moving towards the Meditate upgrade and fixing Palate.
Jake had made good progress in that area, but some things still eluded him, forcing Jake to read back some of the parts in the First Sage’s tome. Still, he had a feeling that the upgrade could come at any time, yet it felt so far away. As he became more confident in initiating the upgrade, he felt as if he could do better or had missed something important.
Still had time and wouldn’t rush it. It wouldn’t surprise him if it still ended up taking a while for him to finally decide to just go for it, and he had a strong feeling that once he did, there would be a lot of upgrades and success coming in short succession.
After he was done with crafting a Dragonsbane Poison and got the upgrades from reading the First Sage’s tome, it was time to begin the dragon hunt in earnest... assuming Villy came through and found a proper target for him, that is.
Comments
“What, record it to bully me in the future?” (Jake) asked jokingly, having definitely not read the mood right.
Alexander C Hyde
2025-12-12 08:40:55 +0000 UTCTyftc
Chloe
2025-11-19 18:52:07 +0000 UTC❤️❤️❤️
Michael Click
2025-11-19 05:36:25 +0000 UTCI think this sentence is missing a word here "Still had time and wouldn’t rush it." Might make more sense if it was: "Still, He had plenty of time and wouldn't rush it." Or "He still had time and wouldn't rush it."
Jacob Kraus
2025-11-18 14:32:36 +0000 UTC“Yeah, that’s another point of criticism that I didn’t really see the need to include, seeing as it was your first time. You spent way too much prep time, but again, if you decided to teach more regularly, you would inevitably get more efficient,” Change to “Yeah, that’s another point of criticism that I didn’t really see the need to include, seeing as it was your first time. You spent way too much time prepping; but again, if you decided to teach more regularly, you would inevitably get more efficient,”
Jacob Kraus
2025-11-18 14:17:51 +0000 UTC"give it to be straight" -> "give it to me straight"
Lo-Fi
2025-11-12 19:19:06 +0000 UTC"The Pantheon of Life didn’t notice they had spies among them" I didn't even noticed that, and I read the damn book
FleetfootedFleer
2025-11-11 19:42:08 +0000 UTCSuch an important character that has so many question marks surrounding them. Drives me a little insane😂
LemonPerson
2025-10-12 03:08:55 +0000 UTCWine bottles of beer -> Villy's motivational warning.
Hellion23
2025-10-08 21:48:15 +0000 UTC"wine bottles of beer" to "chugging divine 40s"
Nate
2025-09-25 01:03:27 +0000 UTCLike Villy wouldn't be able to come through for Jake. Morally justified hunt of a true dragon. Even the Court of shadows wouldn't attempt that lolol. Can't wait. Tyftc.
Trumangolorian
2025-09-24 23:19:25 +0000 UTCI was wondering. According Villies words, he would not have bothered with our Master dunce - the exquisite Duskleave himselfe, except he was indeed a child when taken in (possilble as he was described earlier as very young back than, but who knows in the multiverse), or very special circumstances. I can not wait to learn more about Duskleave
Mikesch
2025-09-24 11:55:16 +0000 UTCTyftc! 🍻
JW Saxby
2025-09-24 10:46:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the B grade evolution! Moral quarrels —> moral qualms?
Clint
2025-09-24 10:12:33 +0000 UTCI'm new at english, what would be loled?
Paulo Furlaneto
2025-09-24 01:22:01 +0000 UTCI really want him to take chalette as a student her being a beastkin play well into Jake path with him being beast like
Nano
2025-09-24 01:03:52 +0000 UTCLegacy of the first Sage being "observing all the loopholes in the system with an ultra high perception and devious bloodline?" Maybe.... would be fun but will be fun either way.
Jeffrey Pearson
2025-09-23 23:36:26 +0000 UTCI think that’s proper informal language. Not worth correcting. It is not technically correct use of English but fine for dialogue.
TNT
2025-09-23 22:50:24 +0000 UTCHonestly I hope we see Jake do lessons here and there as side notes, where he doesn’t completely abandon the non-geniuses as a big thing of humanity is each generation lifting the next higher. It would thematically fit if Jake embodied that in his lessons, not by coddling, but pushing them harder in ways that would help them rather then ignore them entirely.
Nathaniel France
2025-09-23 21:15:25 +0000 UTC“So, you've noticed anyone suspicious yet? I didn’t see anything off on my end or had any weird feelings from anyone during the lesson, but I’m also fully aware that my nerves were tense and I wasn’t exactly paying attention,” Jake said. So you’ve noticed -> So have you noticed Thanks for the chapter Zog!
Cody
2025-09-23 19:47:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-09-23 19:47:31 +0000 UTCTYFTC! Think this phrasing is a typo: give it to be straight -> give it to me straight Could use a title like "Straight talk" if it's not been done before.
Jason Hardman
2025-09-23 19:10:54 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Alexandre8901
2025-09-23 19:06:35 +0000 UTCDo you guys think that meditation will be his transcendent skill, It could also be that his transcendence will be the entire legacy of the first sage. Or something else entirely. just a thought
Dragon
2025-09-23 18:36:04 +0000 UTCFalse wine and True Dragons What about this spin on your idea?
Mateo Lopez
2025-09-23 18:24:03 +0000 UTCHmm well if we have to wait for a dragon how about that demon wedding ark since he was invited or is that going to be a later one?
Zayn Bakir
2025-09-23 18:09:50 +0000 UTCWining for parts?
Charles Ryan
2025-09-23 18:01:05 +0000 UTCWe don't even know if there's something between mythic and divine
Siethrobo
2025-09-23 17:17:13 +0000 UTC99 wine bottles of beer on the wall. It even rolls off the tongue still.
Brandon Stephens
2025-09-23 17:01:18 +0000 UTCWhat? **shocked Pikachu** Don't you know saying that makes you a racist?
Stephen
2025-09-23 16:45:10 +0000 UTCThis is good.
Jeryd Greer
2025-09-23 16:44:15 +0000 UTCChapter title suggestion: Adjusting Expectation
Jeryd Greer
2025-09-23 16:39:39 +0000 UTCTitle: Wine Beer and Dragons. This chapter is actually pretty hard to come up with a witty title for.
Cmndprmpt
2025-09-23 16:13:00 +0000 UTCWas really expecting Jake to go" oh and I didn't even see eversmile this time" Good chapter
Ni
2025-09-23 15:42:24 +0000 UTCTitle: No Child Left Behind?
Tenrog
2025-09-23 15:36:37 +0000 UTCi'm looking forward to the wonder event and shiny elf shenanigans.
brjenness
2025-09-23 15:34:54 +0000 UTCTitle suggestion: Peer Review
Daniel
2025-09-23 15:32:27 +0000 UTCTftc
Shadowind
2025-09-23 15:32:03 +0000 UTCIf you think about it, the "No Child Left Behind" and similar initiatives IRL did more damage to ALL kids, than they ever had the potential to help the stupid or criminal ones... Yes, they sound warm and fuzzy, but in reality those were very damaging
Sergej Fel
2025-09-23 15:30:12 +0000 UTC“You don’t need to try to convince me; I was already going to do it.” I literally loled at this… in the middle of my office at work.
The Dregs
2025-09-23 15:19:39 +0000 UTCIm not gonna wine about it, its beerter than nothing.
R
2025-09-23 14:48:54 +0000 UTCLooking forward to an Epic 20 chapter dragon fight!
Koof Tron
2025-09-23 14:48:09 +0000 UTCI like the idea of the system being a vaccine created by the beings from a higher plane of existence and Jake being something random that grew in a forgotten petri dish.
brjenness
2025-09-23 14:31:14 +0000 UTCSuggested title: Best Teaching Practices
Raymond Lenihan
2025-09-23 14:28:01 +0000 UTCu know what's bassackwards? it is known that geniuses almost always fail to make it to godhood. Gods frequently come from the stubborn who refuse to quit and stick to their path. so what do most major factions do? they focus their resources and training on the gifted. along comes Jake with his ability to strengthen records and armed with both a willingness to fafo and stubborn self confidence. will he be a catalyst to change greatly improving the chances of the less gifted producing far more candidates and better suited candidates for godhood.? the developers of the system sure hope so because the great battle is approaching and the multiverse created to defend them is not strong enough.
brjenness
2025-09-23 14:19:28 +0000 UTCTYFTC… I really hope the cover of this book will be him and the dragon ngl
tigerfishie
2025-09-23 14:12:38 +0000 UTCVery enjoyable chapter. Good conversation. 🙂. And a chpt title idea: a good conversation. Or: evaluations and plans
ABTelford
2025-09-23 14:10:22 +0000 UTCDragon, Dragon, Dragon,
Daniel
2025-09-23 14:03:41 +0000 UTCTyftc
John Durrett
2025-09-23 14:03:25 +0000 UTCWith how much effort to upgrade it and it being based on First Sage text, his 'Meditate' skill better be more than Mythical. To deal with healing the soul at C grade, That skill better reach Divine.
Nate
2025-09-23 13:41:36 +0000 UTCI edited it. It was specifically meant to refer to parts of slain dragons.
Zogarth
2025-09-23 13:37:06 +0000 UTCHe was a c grade dragonkin wasnt he?
Ben Sheahan
2025-09-23 13:36:02 +0000 UTCJust yesterday i was wondering (in my head) if that yip snack-time already happened or not
Jan Backhaus
2025-09-23 13:27:09 +0000 UTCDidn’t you say dragons parts were easy to buy because dragons would sell their body parts themselves? I though you said the during the pantheon of life arc?
Sean Napier
2025-09-23 13:23:17 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-09-23 13:22:09 +0000 UTCThank u for the chapter
C0bra$
2025-09-23 13:20:30 +0000 UTCthere is a one armed dragon from the azure-flight that might be a good target. as long as he is currently b grade..... he already already fafo once and embarrassed the flight.
Stephen Crisel
2025-09-23 13:19:32 +0000 UTCDoesn't he have to wait till the soulflame is done baking?
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 12:59:42 +0000 UTCI laughed so hard at this. And why is the creature doing the horns very Asian. Like "honeeeyyyy dis why you have no boyfren!"
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 12:55:25 +0000 UTCI mean... when you lock down a godqueen of a similar path... what is a succubus to that?
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 12:53:27 +0000 UTCGod I can't wait to see what B grade brings. It's likely a year or more (irl time) away though so I'm trying not to get too hyped. I'm looking forward to finding out what kind of "special" human Jake is and what he gets out of it.
David
2025-09-23 12:50:41 +0000 UTCHas Jake forgotten about irin?
William Rossi
2025-09-23 12:49:12 +0000 UTCTyftc
Staudi
2025-09-23 12:45:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chappy
dash w
2025-09-23 12:44:01 +0000 UTCTyftc!!
A Flashy BR
2025-09-23 12:43:13 +0000 UTCTftc
Meir Banon
2025-09-23 12:37:55 +0000 UTCREE
Sylphie
2025-09-23 12:35:08 +0000 UTCI think hes banking in his meditation upgrade fixing that since either skj ds like hes going for a mythical meditation skill which would be the most broken skill he will have til godhood imo.
Nexas Aurelias
2025-09-23 12:34:26 +0000 UTCSo I'm not sure if anyone has brought it up recently but Jake does have one more thing to do after fixing pallet of the Malefic viper. Absorb a part of yip of yore under Villys supervision. We have just been waiting for the skill fix but that will most likely come before B grade. Others have mentioned the soul flame but I don't know if we need that before B grade. Very excited with the developments recently. We had our sneak peaks of all the top contenders in his universe for the world wonder, and we got our next major big bad set up in an elusive god faction. I think Villy fishing for leads show he is kind of desperate, he has made a friend and he will be damned if he loses him in a similar way to how he lost his family. But they are hiding so well he is grasping for leads. Now I think the teaching was also just generally good for Jake but the fact that the viper has to reach like this for leads and it's pointed out that he is reaching shows a lot.
Mike
2025-09-23 12:29:57 +0000 UTCSome poor dragon is just going to be at the dragon salon getting their horns done and catch an Event Horizon to the face.
Corvid
2025-09-23 12:25:02 +0000 UTCSkeptical, I would say
Eli Evagud
2025-09-23 12:18:31 +0000 UTCHe’s focusing on the dragon hunt over fixing his soul? Priorities dude!
Hayden Leech
2025-09-23 12:15:33 +0000 UTCThere was already Elder Whisper in the PoL. Malfoy would be a problem because the Order is already viewed as an evil snake cult and having too many villains could drift the viewer to seeing the order as not just "flirting with evil" but actually being evil.
Devillelouch
2025-09-23 12:14:41 +0000 UTCThis should be the title "Threaten with a good time"
Eli Evagud
2025-09-23 12:11:15 +0000 UTCTo add on: It feels like too much subversion of expectation in too short of a time. Jasper and the Bow being the other two recent ones. Even just a simple "Shadowy figure or group of people saying "Jake is fine, so he can even resist void gods" or something similar" would have prevented the let down feeling. The teaching arc also would have been good in any post action arc as filler. In a building tension arc it just is too comfy. It reminds me of the Hive Dive where I think it was average fight arc but it was just sandwich between great building tension arcs. The final floor fight also suffers from this, and that was a better and more impactful fight. That fight being in a waiting for payoff section. Or for a non-fight version, the learning the improved shroud arc. Which is generally a good section but just sandwiched between better sections.
Devillelouch
2025-09-23 12:08:39 +0000 UTCI don't know why this popped in my head, but does anyone else think that a character like Lucious Malfoy would be a great Easter egg character in the order of the malefic viper
Leviathan
2025-09-23 12:04:55 +0000 UTCJust throwing out "Merlot Lite" as a title. Kind of a word play off of the brand Miller Lite
Kevin the Composer
2025-09-23 12:03:38 +0000 UTCTftc
IntenseSushi
2025-09-23 12:00:57 +0000 UTCWhen will Jake use the soul flame cradle? Before or after B grade? I guess he will wait till B grade to go back to the loot tower to upgrade gloves? How are Deana Myra and Artemis doing? A lot of stuff to do at order before B grade.
KenTX325
2025-09-23 11:48:39 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Kt-x
2025-09-23 11:46:43 +0000 UTCTitle “Beer N’ Dragons”
Kyle Davis
2025-09-23 11:45:09 +0000 UTCHe expects him to kill a god at S-grade. An A-grade at B-grade. And an S-grade at A-grade.
Yiskah
2025-09-23 11:44:29 +0000 UTCChapter title suggestion. "Unwineding after a long day"
Allformsoflight
2025-09-23 11:43:10 +0000 UTCI am confuzzled. The chapter order is slow rolling a bit too hard. If Vendoli or Chalette are the spies or will come back than hint at that. This kind of "the protagonists don't know" chapter makes sense after the reveal not before it. It is very jarring for the reader, because it feels like "these were filler chapters". The hook was already revealed in the void. Maybe the reveal is getting reworked, causing this ordering but I would swap the ordering for general release. It may work in the audiobook but in a reading format it really doesn't imo. Hopefully the reveal is soon because the teaching mini arc feels bad at this point, it is missing payoff.
Devillelouch
2025-09-23 11:42:19 +0000 UTCWhat about 'Drinking Plans' for the title?
Tyran
2025-09-23 11:41:35 +0000 UTCTftc
Beemoss
2025-09-23 11:40:46 +0000 UTCDo y'all think Jake will get a transendant level meditation skill or just let us see what lies beyond mythic?
Andy Swearingen
2025-09-23 11:35:51 +0000 UTCOh I feel the cliffhanger on Friday coming
Stormy
2025-09-23 11:35:50 +0000 UTCHonestly, with the palate getting fixed soon, I'm hoping that Jake can include desolation as another poison he can use in this fight against true dragons. Even without making the poison itself, Jake should be able to do it. Palate of the Malefic Viper that absorbed the records and poison from the desolate core. Sagacity of the Malefic Viper to give Jake insight as to how to use it. Blood of the Malefic Viper to concentrate the desolation in his blood integrated by palate. Fangs of Man to store it. Fangs of the Malefic Viper to unleash it. Jake has all the tools to use desolation already.
BumAssBumAss
2025-09-23 11:34:13 +0000 UTCTFTC :) Theres gotta be a "hold my beer" joke in there somewhere since Jakes drinking and talking about going off to do something reckless, right? Suggested edits: "Fine… give it to *be* straight. " should be "me" "trying to pick *them* up and carry *others*, " either "them" is an extra word or it should be "them" at the end "“What, record it to bully me in the future?” ** asked jokingly, " missing "Jake" here? "So, *you've* noticed anyone suspicious yet" should be "you" "on my end or *had* any weird" from context should be "have" "fan of *just* attacking some random dragon *just* out shopping " repetition. Ditch either "dragon belongs to will be happy you killed *it* for them, " extra word "would be *kind* of awesome,” Jake said, having *kind* of forgotten to bring" repetition "Still had time and wouldn’t rush it." something missing here "and *success* coming in short *succession*." repetitive. Suggest changing "succession" to "order"
Xander
2025-09-23 11:32:53 +0000 UTCSo Help Me Villy for the title. Secretly chuckle because everyone will assume it's because villy gave feedback and offered to find a dragon, but it's actually the end of "The truth and nothing but the truth. So help me villy."
brjenness
2025-09-23 11:32:35 +0000 UTCI dont think a title will come up. Dragons are tough but still mortal. Killing a really hard enemy is one thing, but killing something that is supposed to live forever is something else.
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 11:32:28 +0000 UTCHow about “Setting Expectations” as a title?
Crysus
2025-09-23 11:31:56 +0000 UTCTftc
NicN
2025-09-23 11:31:02 +0000 UTCTitle: People Parts
Ryan Linus
2025-09-23 11:30:40 +0000 UTCJust some random dragon on the phone (token) with his wife who is yelling at him for not grabbing the right ingredients and suddenly gets smoked by an arcane powershot.
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 11:30:17 +0000 UTCAlco-heresy
Tanner Matone
2025-09-23 11:29:46 +0000 UTCi would say that the title should be how to hunt your dragon or make that the title of the chapter that he does the dragon hunting in question
Dhia
2025-09-23 11:29:39 +0000 UTCI kind of thought that would be the Viper's take on his lesson, seei g as he based his approach on old Earth teaching styles
Benjamin Davis-Lorton
2025-09-23 11:27:48 +0000 UTCTeacher performance review
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 11:26:44 +0000 UTC„You did a decent job for a Guest Teacher - now for your reward: Murder!“ Love it :-)
Jana
2025-09-23 11:26:31 +0000 UTCTyftc
Ben Cox
2025-09-23 11:25:23 +0000 UTCYes!!!! A hunting we will go! And then B GRADE BABY!!! Does villy expect jake to kill a god at s grade? Also, are jakes skills leveled up enough to not lose too many levels after evolution?
RnR_ RnR
2025-09-23 11:25:15 +0000 UTCSo we know that there is a title for a escaping a god trying to kill you (from that guy that bragged about it who got killed early on by villy) so I always assumed there would be one for a mortal killing a god too. And since killing a true dragon at c grade is at the same level as killing a god as a mortal will he gain a title for it?
Sammot
2025-09-23 11:24:30 +0000 UTC100% Jake should merc at dragon outside of the grocery store just minding it's own business.
Derek Raw
2025-09-23 11:23:18 +0000 UTCFrom what I remember those were things like nail clippings
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-09-23 11:21:52 +0000 UTCtftc
Matthias
2025-09-23 11:21:50 +0000 UTCDon’t threaten Jake with a good time
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-09-23 11:21:03 +0000 UTCHow about something like Wine of a taught time For a chapter name. I'm sure someone else has a better idea
Georgia Guy-Williams
2025-09-23 11:21:01 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-09-23 11:20:26 +0000 UTCMight be reading this wrong, but isn’t this chapter conflicting with what was said earlier about dragon parts? This implies they don’t like to sell there body parts, where an earlier chapter said something along the lines of - they knew how overpowered they were as a species and sold off their parts for a load of money - or something like that
Calum
2025-09-23 11:17:54 +0000 UTCI love this title
Rewdan
2025-09-23 11:17:42 +0000 UTCLove the title even if it doesn’t really reflect the chapter
ShadeDweller9578
2025-09-23 11:17:02 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Kirin
2025-09-23 11:16:17 +0000 UTCPokemon ORAS 2v2 Shiny Cagelocke
BlackRazaras
2025-09-23 11:14:54 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean couldn't get a good title it's magnificent!
GeneralBlack
2025-09-23 11:14:29 +0000 UTCHonestly I like it lol
Christopher cashen
2025-09-23 11:11:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Sogala
2025-09-23 11:11:45 +0000 UTCTftc
Ed Soto
2025-09-23 11:11:30 +0000 UTCTyfc
Devillelouch
2025-09-23 11:11:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Connor
2025-09-23 11:11:06 +0000 UTC