Moros Sub-Sector 296M35
Added 2020-10-11 07:46:57 +0000 UTCThe Moros Sub-Sector, where the story truly began. The changes are far smaller than in the Smilodon Sub-Sector or at Nyx, though with Taylor due to come by for a visit at Wuhan, it might easily change in the future...
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I would second that motion. These early chapters definitely feel like pre-beta versions.
2020-10-13 01:45:59 +0000 UTCI don't know if you've said anything before, but is there any chance of you going back and doing some typo correction for the first twenty or so chapters of the Weaver Option? I can barely stand to go back and read them because I barely got through it the first time. only the quality of the story and characterizations kept me going. The typos were... Exceedingly painful and I realize English is not your first language so congratulations on getting as good as you have. But those early chapters definitely need a little love.
2020-10-12 19:43:04 +0000 UTCYes, I did back in the planning stage...and it was far too grimdark for my poor brain. Taylor would have 'served' Chaos trying her best to take everything with her in the cauldron of destruction, and well...this story has no happy ending.
Antony444
2020-10-12 08:38:41 +0000 UTCSo I always wanted to ask this. Have you ever thought of doing a version of this where ultramarine does not manage to interrupt the spell at the start
DrkShdow
2020-10-12 08:02:03 +0000 UTCIt's also a security net and an incitation to Governors to rule wisely. Of course there are the Fay regiments and the Knights...Ouralia's reason it's not inhabited may be mentioned later.
Antony444
2020-10-11 17:30:34 +0000 UTCHa:! Ha! Ha! I have such devoted readers...
Antony444
2020-10-11 17:29:18 +0000 UTCYes, I have to admit that absence of Astartes is somehow striking and sad. On the other hand they do now have Knights, which is something. By the way, what happened to Ouralia, I don't think it was ever mentionned.
Boris Michenski
2020-10-11 08:04:58 +0000 UTCThis has made up my mind time to reread the whole story again. No sleep onwards
DrkShdow
2020-10-11 07:58:32 +0000 UTC
