Illuminaria

Chapter 192 / B3-37: Finding the Edges

Uggg.

Chapter 191 / B3-36: Juggling Plans

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X3TPQMmSFljfIAwA28PotJhUNjoSM2czTn0DREiuf2o/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 190 / B3-35: Gone to the Dogs

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TxRih_WWhbkdUw3EAFULAi3saTNEQAec6KIolytRQ6U/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 189 / B3-34: Expand the Pack

Thank you all for being so patient. I had to work out in my head what the second half of this book was going to be about. I think I have a feel for it now. Please let me know what you think of it.

Have a great weekend.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15S5amXmhMRzXPSgr7XvWuNdJIa59UYxS-DFIfh1kMqc/edit?usp=sharing

Bit delayed

Sorry for the delay in posts. I am reworking the next section. I will be posting a whole bunch as soon as I fix the next few chapters.

Please bear with me. I have been writing all day, and what I have now is better. Let me smooth it out tomorrow, and I'll have new posts then.

King of Spring

Wow! I hadn't realized you guys would be so responsive to polls. This could be a great sounding board. So excited.

So here is the huge question that has been keeping my brain churning away at night:

Should Joe become the King of Spring? (Can pick multiple options)

Giantkiller

I have barely mentioned level disparity so far, which has me questioning my first pass at Giantkiller.
Which do you like better: keep my first idea or switch to something more in line with previous designs?

A Little Help - Part 2

Same question, which would you pick?

Achievement: You have utilized a legendary while you are under 20th level.  Your conduct has awarded you the following choice of Traits:

A Little Help - Part 1

Which would you pick?

Achievement: You have defeated an epic elite enemy four times your level. You have gained 1 unassigned attribute point. Your conduct has awarded you the following choice of Traits:

Chapter 188 / B3-33: Bearing a Blossom

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TGVSA8vvyQoNfgXwKdyfOFZ3gkWHFRu9ulZdjYy57Nk/edit?usp=sharing

187 / B3-32: Tainted Treasures

These next chapters have been a ton of work. Into new territory. Feedback is always welcome.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oFip8OL-eVsQHztOJ_KlQqhqVMgsKEtcXw6Him0gzqw/edit?usp=sharing

186 / B3-31: Bad Wolf

Raaawwwrrrrrrgg!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1niluPweU6oabSZFpung4sa_8ZQ6nqeXPWBQGq-L3pWs/edit?usp=sharing

Again, please comment and let me know if you liked this climax.

Chapter 185 / B3-30: The Erlking

At long last, the battle between the guilders and the Erlking commences. Please let me know your thoughts. This is another big sequence, so I want to make sure I did it justice.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Du9svFx5FvVURET7jr2iUd2wVvmF4d0FPBncDSZvlnM/edit?usp=sharing

184 / B3-29: Back into the Fire

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I7wfH5MYRaqjxsufPZL6a66joiTuw8aRTPMgOX7YLZc/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 183 / B3-28: Call the Cavalry

We are getting close to the showdown between the Lark King and the guilders. I'll be dropping chapters in pairs again for the next few posts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lIScRjT7iVoUOZKQAHtb1yLnXg3DRWt0rWqWufh3b1o/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 182 / B3-27: To the Heart of Deadness

Image needs work, but I liked the feel of it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kSyqdtJoI3J2PCyZDC6rizJg3Vj73b0-voDiLrUPPvs/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 181 / B3-26: High Dive

Hope everyone had a great Xmas as well as the New Years to come.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gsaL69NQ3Vz31SkKoDRtdJDhXxDRk_vwmBreIbGbyJQ/edit?usp=sharing

Bonus Art

I know I should be writing, but I was in an art mood this morning.

Chapter 180 / 24: Hooray for Yuk

So, there is a bit of a retcon in this chapter. I had Yuk's level shown before now, and it shouldn't have been. Yuk should have been a ? for level until now. Not a huge retcon, but I thought I'd clarify it.

Hope everyone had a great Christmas (for those who celebrated it; and just a damn great day for those who don't)

New chapter:

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Chapter 179 / 24: Going the Wight Way

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QoADj4AkDB0uKWS6Dr9ZOZmJS8AqjZQr_Ek-iJTyaG0/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 178 / 23: A Party of Three

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15x7ZvxQ-kPuqTJpKu4JY6VhuXG-LVRV7vdBIDS_3uvM/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 177 / 22: The Sword in Stone

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VBM2576IJKLykvXVK-kD2jIlSSNBhXQPWezoH_-q9v4/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 176 / B3-21: Mummy Rot Sucks

https://docs.google.com/document/d/124zqxA12Eq4vwDW-g-RHmoR358Fy1MJLAbR5IP1BfOQ/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 175 / 20: Found Underground

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HO-33NrpcU5S0-HTwPsQddb95tGBJQQKv5kMPdFTZd0/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 174 / 19: What the Yuk

Last time Yuk's explanation of who/what they were was a couple of sentences. This time they got something far more worthy of them.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qRtsqJ9nJ4l7NU7MoHvSmu_lorZEXis-GeyTKa6ej8A/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 173 / B3-18: Wonders of Witch Sight

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGkHO-BGcWrlLDkKX1NJUYZyU9Tz6-nprcs20PcJ6sg/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 172 / B3-11: That’s One Way to Do It

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X8LvuLE1EHYRTi089hXyCYr04Ma50A-bckwASlsXUwo/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 171 / 16: Get Out

https://docs.google.com/document/d/114e9Oir1BxrzRBWYKCCP2MoERBRt11vlb9e2PfdhP6Y/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 170 / 15: Stygian Struggles

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xe-l_xiQG0h9W9UPwCm87uU_5xpIkXmeoFhLwO_Y3N4/edit?usp=sharing