Poll Winner -- Jaune x Velvet -- Never Judge a Book...
Added 2023-11-02 01:54:39 +0000 UTC“Well, well, well,” a familiar voice drawled. “
Comments
Finally had time to sit down and read this, great work as always. Really loved how you built up to the smut, really adds that extra layer to it! Cant wait for the next one, also wouldnt mind seeing more of this in future if you are up for it!
jason
2023-11-07 17:28:28 +0000 UTCBlushed to my ears while reading
bob potat
2023-11-03 23:10:32 +0000 UTCVelvet being a NaruSaku shipper becomes so much more believable a paragraph later when it’s revealed that she’s also just a total coomer
First Last
2023-11-03 17:22:50 +0000 UTCGreat story hope there’s a sequel.
Shawn
2023-11-02 20:36:43 +0000 UTCYeah, it kinda got away from me a little bit. Haha.
erised fiction
2023-11-02 20:36:36 +0000 UTCDamn is this the longest one shot yet? Part of it actually got cut off in the email
JugHerKnot
2023-11-02 12:43:40 +0000 UTChehe outstanding work dude! I really like how you depicted Velvet in this one, she was incredibly cute and adorable thought the chapter, and once the action got going her inner depraved pervert came out lol. If Coco ever finds out what happened I can already imagine her muttering to herself that its always the quiet ones you need to watch out for XD. Lol now I really want to see a sequel for this to see how their relationship develops :)
fdxr
2023-11-02 03:33:26 +0000 UTC
