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(WIP) Sis's Gamble 2 - Page 49

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(WIP) Sis's Gamble 2 - Page 49

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Thanks to both of you

DM TEAM

Thanks!

DM TEAM

Ah yes, I posted a correction suggestion, but that one seems to make more sense. I think I misunderstood the intended meaning.

Side B

"I'm not a very confident" -> "I'm not very confident" (The 'a' should be removed) "Where they can feel they contestants, instead of see them" -> ", where they can feel their contestants, instead of seeing them" (A continuation of the previous sentence, their instead of they, seeing instead of see.)

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Just thought I’d point out before you make the final version, It says “feel they contestants” instead of “feel the contestants”

Dm_is_best

I'm excited 😊

Jamie Hawkins


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