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One Serving Choice! Page 549

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One Serving Choice! Page 549

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from what i understand, kip's said they only map out about 20 pages at a time

fa1995

You kind of assume that there isn't a storyboard or outline(?) Besides, to me at least, it has always felt like the breakfast with sister saga and no lunch break were also set out to become this long, Kip just became dispassionate (might be wrong here). I don't really understand what people mean when they say they want things to move faster. We've been getting hot scenes and a lot of weight gain along with character development, that's what we're here for, no? There must be something specific you want out of this comic, or do you just want the comic to end to make space for a new project? I'm genuinely curious because I (and many others, I think) don't really see reason to offer this complaint...

sad hammerhead

Right? I always see people calling Saiya a bad person... but I doubt many of them would be able to resist if both Aika and Tessa were aggressively seducing them.

Anon8371

I feel that's more on outside of the paetreon here a lot of people in the paetreon have been nice though I could be totally wrong. Say in the forums or deviant art you do see that "don't like it don't read it mentality which if you ask me doesn't make you a real fan in any form of media. Change can be good but people tend to fear change and while I obviously can't speak for kip I have to respect him for sticking with his guns he probably gets super annoyed, so kip if you do read this don't try to be a people pleaser, most of us are here because we do like what you do which will attract more like minded people, and take the reasonable criticism into consideration to better your craft.

Rugal1998

i appreciate that, i really tried to be careful about my tone lol that said - even when there is legit criticism a lot of people just default to "wElL yOu DoNt HaVe To ReAd It If YoU dOnT lIkE iT" so it's nice to not have that happen (so far at least)

fa1995

that last panel is 100/10

gaybunny

that poor chair,,,,,I should be in its place instead

Nenohi Dayo

Well you're certainly a lot more reasonable sounding than what I've seen on forums where people barely even offer any legit constructive criticism, on said forums they usually just devolve into shit talking. And I understand where the frustration can come from with how stupid saiya acts and while I can't read kips mind I'm pretty sure he did that on purpose to make the audience yell at saiya for blundering so much, it's a writing form that's not for everyone but so far I've liked.

Rugal1998

I do the same maneuvering with my belly when I eat

Baby Sweet

I could die happy under that ass

Melissa Eclipse

Once this guy dies of suffocation I will take his place

Fuzzy

So, with that chair we can assume that adamantium exists in large supply in Kip's universe 🤣

Jonas

Saiya desperately needs to discover polyamory

Tendra Hinman

i'm sorry if this comes off the wrong way, but... for the next comic you do (in however many years it takes to wrap this one up lol), can you *please* just make a storyboard for the whole thing before you start it? i get that "slow-burn" comics are a thing, and that's largely what you've been doing throughout your career, but this one feels like none of the characters' actions have significant long term consequences bc the same story threads keep repeating ad infinitum (with the exception of tessa's most recent streaming incident, which took over 3 real-time years) with no signs of any possible conclusion. the characters also just don't seem to learn anything from their actions despite how long it's been since the start of this, which impacts their likability by a significant margin. again, i'm sorry for being harsh, but it's just frustrating because i truly do enjoy your work, and have been following for longer than i can keep track of off the dome. ik i'm gonna get trashed in the replies, and i may just end up deleting this whole-ass essay later, who knows. but i don't think i'm the only one who holds this opinion.

fa1995

With how big and wide aika is getting I see that as a absolute win

Rugal1998

Soon Kip will have to switch on a wider page layout, for... thick reasons (°ー°〃)

Jumper9

Lord knows most of us here wouldn't be able to beat the allegations.

Rugal1998

That chair is doing Atlas proud. Fight on, bröther

Sepptic

That chair is about to snap like Saiya's willpower

Phat94

Rip to chair next page or two. Also saiya! Stop worrying about Tessa and get in there and help aika eat!

Philip Scarpa

Chair is competing in world's strongest man competition.

Haris Pilton

I volunteer as replacement chair 🙋‍♂️

sad hammerhead

chair is fighting for it's life

YATARIXO

That chair is fighting for its life😂my guy will propably give in next page

TitanTankHD


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