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One Serving Choice! Page 248

"One who cannot choose between strawberry and chocolate will enjoy neither" 

-Ancient Kipsian proverb from 1400 KIPc

One Serving Choice! Page 248

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woa

I WAS GONNA SAY THE SAME GOD DAMN THING

Plaidux

I...I'm... I'M A GOOFY GOOBER

Traegerthorn

That's completely fine and I don't judge anyone who wants only the sexy parts, however like I said people have different ideas of what actually are the sexy parts and I think you are specifically only referring to eating scenes.

Kipteitei

I have a feeling where this is going to go. I really want my feeling to be true.

Haris Pilton

Yeah, to be completely transparent, I am referring to the sexy parts. There have been a lot of climaxes story wise of course and revelations but really only one really massive “sexy” scene (at Tessas house). Personally those are why I’m here over all of the other aspects, and if you view it from that lens, the comic can be frustrating for sure. I know the comic still isn’t over at all, and we will see more of those moments, but my point is that the balance between story/sexy moments seems to be more in the favor of story. Which is completely fine, this is just my opinion.

Charles Entertainment Cheese

That's a good point but I don't think they are referring to story moments but rather the sexy parts. And like I said people have different opinions of what is hot and what is not

Kipteitei

I feel like a love triangle story is not generally going to have a lot of huge moments that progress the story. It feels like it's more about the building tension between characters and eventually resolving that. I think that might explain the frustration you're describing, as each relationship can't really reach those milestones while the love triangle is still going on.

Some Aigis

Tessa losing control of her appetite 👌👌

Ryan Caday

Got any other "Kipsian proverbs?"

Erick Lopez

I’m not saying there haven’t been those moments and I apologize if I’m misspeaking. I think I’m more so looking for the apex of the story. Just part of the intrigue with the comic to see when it’s going to happen. Love the comic still!

SpaceExtra

I'd love to see the two middle panels on their own together without the text. They so beautifully encapsulate the two characters and the choice Saiya is struggling through now (like those lovely Bottoms Up! drawings obviously do but with, you know, fewer butts).

Johannes

To be fair there's been a lot of climaxes but it varies wildly what people consider the 'juicy moments'.

Kipteitei

Decisions, but I want it all So I get it all I wanna eat the whole cake

YATARIXO

I feel it as well. I like slow burn stories personally, but every time I feel a climax is coming it doesn’t. But I’m in agreement with you and I love the character build up as well.

SpaceExtra

Secret third option: polyamorous relationship and you get to have 2 fat piggies as your girlfriends

Supernova

clever girl

Zig

duality of man above me^

BigFaunaFan

The last few pages have really made me appreciate the depth of the story you've created here. The relationships keep getting more and more tangled, with all the crushes, uncertainty and secret motivations...IMO this is your best work to date and I'm excited to see where it goes!

Circlesquarer

Anyone else starting to really feel the length of this comic? I mean, I really like the character development and the story, but we have not had that many juicy moments that kept the story going forward like in previous comics. It kinda feels like it’s been building to something for nearly 250 pages, but we’re still not there at all. I’m still really enjoying it, but I gotta say I did prefer the faster pace of FNN, for instance.

Charles Entertainment Cheese

When Tessa's lips are that adorable in every single panel, I'd happily bankrupt myself to fill them with more and more sushi.

Phat94

This is it it's time to see were saiya's resolve lies in

Rugal1998


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