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Noyemi 2 The Race WIP 9

This is a new page at the beginning, after reviewing the edits on this page, I felt that the scene transition wasn't enough. The issue was beyond that page. I realized that I didn't establish where Kamek is (a sort of pit stop place at the start of the race along with other navigators and announcers), so a new page was necessary. Of course it still needs polish, but the comic also needed a crowd shot at the very least.

The new page is sandwiched between two pages you've already seen, let me know if it flows better this way.

Noyemi 2 The Race WIP 9 Noyemi 2 The Race WIP 9 Noyemi 2 The Race WIP 9

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