Amy/Luna: Proof readers wanted
Added 2018-04-13 03:41:10 +0000 UTCHiyas! I'm probably 1/2-2/3rds done with the Amy/Luna panty scene, and I just finished a major milestone in the story: Luna orgasms into Amy's panties.
This scene is very action oriented and it involves a lot of positions. My main concern is some of the visual descriptions I'm making only make sense in my head. If anyone's interested in proof reading what I've got so far, please send me a comment/message, because your feedback will really help me make a great scene.
So what's after this milestone? Amy goes to class wearing the cum-soaked panties. And when she gets back from class at the end of the day, Luna rewards her by teaching her a trick. Then, Amy gets to use this trick on Luna.
