Wanna help me proof read a scene with Anna?
Added 2018-01-03 06:22:46 +0000 UTCHiyas! Once again, happy new year. I hope you're all enjoying the new release. I'd love feedback when you get a chance to play it.
I already completed this tiny scene with Ms. Waterloo and Lucy (chubby trans girl) and I'm writing this exposition scene between you and Anna. Would anyone be interested in proof reading it? There isn't a lot of "action", if you know what I mean, but I'm concerned there's a lot of "reading between the lines" in its content that may only make sense to me.
If you'd like to proof read it, please post a comment or send me a message and I'll send you a google doc. Thanks :)
