So doing the render of page 14 taught me that if I want to meet my self imposed deadline, I'm going to have to start rendering pages now, and get comfortable enough to render 4 pages a day when the flats are all done.
So I decided to render Page 13... and I hated it. So I spent my entire Saturday night redrawing, reinking, reflatting, and rendering Page 13. I rewrote some of the dialogue to get some points across better... hopefully.
Also, have an adjusted page 14. I like the shadows more, and I got rid of the specular on the skin. I dunno, I don't like it when skin looks like plastic, and those speculars were doing that for me