I like where you are taking this.
Maybe the words scrawl into a portal that sucks you into her mouth :-D
Able 34 Bravo
2026-02-13 16:43:00 +0000 UTC
Most of Felarya's Cultists: "Moron and heretic...."
The few open Demon Worshipers: **Giving you thumbs up and encouraging you hat having your soul literally merge with a succubus will be great even though they never did."
David Dent
2026-02-13 03:38:01 +0000 UTC
Only a select few I would say. Felaryan Succubi come in two varieties:
"I am more powerful than you and don't need a contract to eat you! Let's do some funny sexy games and if you amuse me I might keep you or eat you~"
"This is the perfectly safe (for me) contract that legal binds you (for all eternity) to give you a temple and fully armored cultists (I had them earlier and what woman's body isn't a temple? Mwhahaha). So just sign here. It's not like you can read 15th Eonic Demon Runes anyway right? Right.
David Dent
2026-02-13 03:36:40 +0000 UTC
Technically Vivian's magic is called "Fascination" and it does seem similar don't it? Hmm I wonder if this is why we had theories for years that the naga and succ on her staff might be symbolic of something? ^_-
David Dent
2026-02-13 03:34:14 +0000 UTC
Marvelous to see a contract done almost as complex as one of Crystal's. Just missing the upside down hieroglyphs and words scrawling into a portal that actually sucks you into a room that only lets you out when you agree to all the terms plus premium features for your friends and family.
David Dent
2026-02-13 03:32:33 +0000 UTC
NGL, now I kinda want to see a drawing (or short comic, whatever) of someone who is contractually obligated to climb into her mouth.
Out of curiosity, when you say that "her favorite way of hunting [is] to get the prey to walk by themselves into her mouth because they were bound by it" do you mean that there is magic accompanying the contract that causes them to do it of their own volition kind of like Vivian's mind control, or do you mean that they do it because there is something worse in store if they don't?
And if the latter, what is "worse" than being swallowed?
Able 34 Bravo
2026-02-12 15:56:54 +0000 UTC
I wonder how many humans manage to get contracts that are... relatively less perilous.
Kevin Bowman Jr.
2026-02-11 21:28:47 +0000 UTC
This needs to be a follow up :-D
Able 34 Bravo
2026-02-11 13:09:26 +0000 UTC
Arale is a hottie or should I say coldie 🥶 so I wouldn't really mind the consequences (I guess 😅)
JohnboyX
2026-02-09 21:25:07 +0000 UTC
As if signing a contract wasn't already stressful enough...
Bloedde
2026-02-09 21:02:13 +0000 UTC
This is so good <3
Snow
2026-02-09 15:41:22 +0000 UTC
Thank you :D
Karbo
2026-02-09 10:40:15 +0000 UTC
I love how the text on the huuuuge contract looks. You always do really nice environmental details that make characters FEEL big
pizza
2026-02-08 19:34:07 +0000 UTC
Je vois bien Menyssan surgir de nulle part, déguisée en Phoenix Wright et criée "Objections!!"