Vore day POV WIP2
Added 2023-07-18 20:30:12 +0000 UTCThe page in progress. Well it was a hard choice but I decided to go with the harpy version :)
To be honest I thought the ending of the first version made for a better single picture with a better composing but for vore day specifically i think this one works slightly better ^^
I do plan to turn the ending of the first into a full picture at some points though :3
Comments
It's in Tome 3: The Curse
Nap25
2023-07-26 19:00:14 +0000 UTCWhich one is that in?
Able 34 Bravo
2023-07-26 17:50:49 +0000 UTCWe haven't seen much from Crisis lately. It's good to see she's still up to her usual shenanigans 😂
Able 34 Bravo
2023-07-26 17:49:57 +0000 UTCIt's coming along great! Always lovely to see these giant ladies having a nice time for Vore Day! Satisfied Crisis is such a treasure. x3 I also like how the 'small' harpy's wing protrudes in from off-panel next to Melany, for some reason. I guess it adds to the feeling of continuity. Also, as much as I love both versions of the final panel, I must admit I like the fact that a certain slug-girl gets a bit more of the spotlight in this version. I just love how you depicted her here!
PrinnyDood
2023-07-22 11:24:18 +0000 UTChaha XD
Karbo
2023-07-22 10:59:32 +0000 UTCAwesome work. Can't wait till vore day. I'm glad that you're not scrapping the first version. We can't waste that glorious ass shot of Melany.
Azure Pimpernel
2023-07-22 00:57:38 +0000 UTC;3
Karbo
2023-07-21 14:24:48 +0000 UTChehe ;D
Karbo
2023-07-21 09:18:12 +0000 UTCI missed seeing how content Crisis is with a gurgling belly full of tinies!
Greek
2023-07-19 15:26:36 +0000 UTCAh, damn, I was really hoping for the other version. Good to hear that it’s planned to be its own pic at some point, at least.
RoseRambles
2023-07-19 13:40:16 +0000 UTC20 days left looking good!
Devilnaga
2023-07-19 09:44:57 +0000 UTCFinally Crisis gets the maw shot she deserves
Nick2802
2023-07-19 02:34:08 +0000 UTCPretty nice! but Drayla doesn't appear in the group photo as a result...
Rimuru997
2023-07-18 23:39:15 +0000 UTCwell this is coming together wonderfully ^^
Tyln
2023-07-18 23:00:48 +0000 UTCLove that Pipril made an appearance!
Solace Chaostra
2023-07-18 21:30:45 +0000 UTCwonderful compromise :)
Solace Chaostra
2023-07-18 21:29:48 +0000 UTCperfection
Noodles n anime
2023-07-18 21:22:37 +0000 UTCOoh, exciting! I was a bit more of a fan of the first version, but I appreciate that you gave us a Melany booty-view haha. I definitely agree that it would make a better single image though.
John Doe
2023-07-18 21:13:36 +0000 UTCLove to see all of these ladies, especially Crisis and Melany. I just recently started my yearly reading of the Felarya Tomes. There's few things that make my heart race like it does when Lea disappears between Melany's lips. Great work as always Karbo!
Nap25
2023-07-18 20:45:29 +0000 UTCOh nice! We're also getting a small(er) pred vore POV.
Feedfancier
2023-07-18 20:41:05 +0000 UTClove to see Melany, great work like always
Boggle08
2023-07-18 20:38:51 +0000 UTCHappy vore day indeed 😊
Blue
2023-07-18 20:38:38 +0000 UTC
