Succubi at work graphic novel project

haha don't tell me dude ^^;

Karbo

. . . I can't decide! I'll just be super unhelpful and let you & the others sort it out. xD Also, I just noticed it says that was posted 10 years ago. Time really does fly, huh?

PrinnyDood

hehe alright, thank you for the suggestion, those are nice picks :D

Karbo

Alright it's noted ;3 you picked some good choices here in term of rhythm ^^

Karbo

XP

Karbo

hehe X3

Karbo

ok XD

Karbo

He wants to make a new comic out of it ;)

As long as the first vore scene is in there I am happy

Jimmypootron

that picture was ages ago... so you are still planning to work on it?

Hola

The story has some wonderful imagery. I especially enjoyed Menyssan rippling her stomach to unsteady her meal. That was very stimulating! 😋

Ailith

I don't care how you do it... but you need to do it >.>

turboman500

Ok my picks: 1. Demon moving Sardon towards the hall with the 3 giant succubi with his pitchfork, 2. Unknown giant succubi playing a game of "tug of war " between her oesophagus and her hand with one of the prisoners, 3. Sardon first meeting Menyssan lying in her soft palm as she examines him, 4. Menyssan placing Sardon on her swollen belly making him listen to the cries of those being digested alive, 5. Menyssan holding Sardon above her saliva build-up mouth with her long tongue sticking out (a tiny prisoner inside is holding for his life onto her uvula), 6. Menyssan swallowing Sardon, 7. Sardon is shown inside the belly of Menyssan along with the other prisoners she ate.

JohnboyX

I´ll just write down which passages I think are the best from the story and then add a comment at the end. Number One: The prisoner in her hand was given a full view of the moist, red cavern in front of him during the process, and he began to thrash and kick wildly in her grasp. The demoness smiled innocently. "You don't enjoy the view, mortal ?" Number Two: She was more than ready for him, her huge legs spread wide apart, nonchalantly exposing her broad, pink slit; judging by her dripping vulva, the girl was enjoying herself immensely. Number Three: The man became mad with terror, staring as the inexorably approaching abyss filled his vision with its moist, humid depths. Little by little, he was lowered past her lips, dipped all the way inside. The descent stopped for a moment to give him plenty of time to gaze into the back of her mouth... Number Four: The succubus held Sardon there for a moment, savoring his fear and the desperate struggle of the man in her throat, her cheeks flushed slightly from her intense delight. And for the Number Five: The final scene where Menyssan is taunting and teasing her victims inside her belly. What I think would turn out very great is if they could hear her inside the belly and react with fear and so on ( like it would probably be in "real life" I guess ) Those were my favourite parts of the story. Add some gurgle sounds there, some nice burps and smirk faces here, spice it up with some teasing and demonic glee and you got yourself a pretty nice comic I think :)