Naughty trio story board

melany

Nick2802

melany!

Jimmypootron

I'm biased, so I of course think Malika should be the one to eat the last human :P - She's got a big appetite, to support them massive mammaries. Plus it's not like she gets fed often :P

turboman500

Very interesting having that exclusive inside look into the early developement cycle of a comic :-) . As for things that in my opinion can still be changed/added to enhance the vore a little since the pages are still in an early concept phase if I understood it correctly how about a full body view of one of the preds (leaning towards Melany ^^ ) with an inside shot of the preys that are trapped in her stomach like in the "Chat with a Succubus" picture, "Dungeon and Fairies" or page 38 of "Check and Mate" . Moreover seeing more than just the head of a giant predator when she already holds the human in her open mouth or is about to put him/her there shortly like in "Trapper and Prey" or "Once in a While" with Temi is something I always found quite thrilling about past vore pictures. Those are just ideas based on personal preference though ;-) . Curious to hear what you have to say and excited for suggestions of the other Patrons as well. Ohhh almost forgot ^^' I'm all for Melany on getting the last snack of course ^_^ .

JohnboyX

(Oop, sorry for the accidental double post xD) Oh wow, you're not kidding with 'naughty', huh? Just the way I like it though. x3 I love how it's shaping up already, and it's also really neat to see sketchy early draft like this, I love the peek into your creative process! Overall I'd be pretty happy with whoever gets the last one, but I'm leaning slightly towards Melany, since she is supposed to always have room for 'one more', after all. xP

PrinnyDood

Oh wow, you're not kidded with 'naughty'

PrinnyDood

I'm leaning towards melany

Tyrion13

Melany, though have Malika feed it to her

Whitelion03

Vivian!

Konton454

Malika

Honestly, I'm fine with any of them eating the last one, as long as there are plenty of inside views of the one doing it. ;)

Meddwynn Ravencroft

Well Vivian seems to be the most dominant of the Trio so I'd assume she would normally be the one to eat the very last one unless she was being playful. There's been a lot with her though, so I'm leaning more towards Melany or Malika myself. Melany is my personal preference simply because I enjoyed the part where she almost ate Lea in the manga series so much. She's an absolute delight as a predator.

Moosey