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The Three Commandments - Page 23

And it all comes crashing down - what do you think the ultimate punishment is?

(Also they are being taken to the open air sort of balcony/gathering area in the Keep, where Aida and Keleth depart from in the first Dragon Rider, hence the sunset)

The Three Commandments - Page 23

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I’m guessing she gets exiled while the dragon is forced to stay.

Felbun

SACRED bond. That explains the last part of it. The order isn't just a partnership any more, the bond has become a revered thing. Incompetent leadership, crippled next generation of dragons, AND a corruption of what's held sacred. Three major offenses rolled in to one. Verdict: execution

Zhon Lord

I think they are more angry for her being a crappy manager, rather than having sex with a dragon. After all she almost collapsed their whole organization.

Hiss

Love isnt a capital offence though I feel like this is pretty extreme. Could have just demoted her.

Riptide The Dragon

This is worth the wait!

Aquilak

They will be probably sentenced to death. They could pushed over the edge of the balcony and with tied limbs the dragon couldn't save his lover. If you don't want to end in tragic way the dragon could free himself and catch her last second, then fly away as fast he can. Other riders may never find them again and if the comic with a princess and a dragon is in the same universe, they could have a kid eventually. OR they would be forced to wear permament mark of treason and would be banished. The latter is the best outcome for the pair tbh.

Lev

Welp. That;s what you get for bad management of a military organization. You get very dead.

Hiss

I don't think it's about the rule; I think it is about her decision to turn her back on her peers, her comrades, her subordinates, her very duty... All for the sake of lust. This is true mutiny at its finest, and it is GLORIOUS.

Heh, if anyone couldn't tell, I have zero remorse for this pair, and I am eager to see the real climax of this tale.

My guess is a very long drop off a very short pier. Fits a leader that neglects their duty and lets everything collapse like this. Either that, or a fate worse than death; Exile, knowing you're to live the rest of your pitiful life having turned your back on everything you held dear to you, and with no one who would dare lend a hand to assist such a disgrace. Branded so that everyone knows your story, your sin, your disgrace, and the fact it is all. Your. Fault.

You broke a rule that doesn't yet exist! For that you must die REE.

Riptide The Dragon


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