POLL 2 (Spoiler for Ch 31 - read 31 first of Devil's Harem)
Added 2021-02-14 23:00:02 +0000 UTCPlease also respond to the other poll about Mrs. Rebecca being a part of the harem, if you haven't already.
NOTE (VERY IMPORTANT): I actually already changed Chapter 31, to address the issue with several of you having a negative reaction to how Mr. Watson is being treated. (Please check it out again, if you haven't.) However, I also want to get an idea for how everyone feels about it overall.
Q: In Ch. 31, were you OK with Mrs. Rebecca's comment about kicking her husband out of the house?
(If you need a refresher, what she originally said was:) 'I admitted that I think I am in love with you, and have decided that I am NOT going to fuck him anymore until I decide how to handle this situation. I also told him that I will be kicking him out of bed, and out of the house, if I decide I want to fuck you and he also happens to be home.’
Our main character then decided that he really liked the feeling of power this gave him, and prompted him to have some pretty 'I like to steal women from other men' thoughts, even though he knows that's not ethical, and that he shouldn't think like that.
IMPORTANT: I already made a change, but I'm always open to making further adjustments if you guys don't like the direction the story has taken. You just have to let me know!
Comments
It might be nice to have Kai meet with him. It might be awkward for Kai, but for her husband, he's probably used to that. I am curious about how her husband feels about her. From what has been mentioned in the story so far, he'd probably be happy for her.
Protress
2021-02-22 00:29:07 +0000 UTCThanks for making that distinction, because I feel like I've read (less involved) stories where this kind of thing happens, and no one has a problem with it. But that's a good point. When you care about the characters enough, and especially with Mr. Watson seeming like a pretty alright guy, it appears to make the situation feel different than it would otherwise.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2021-02-15 18:48:06 +0000 UTCIn a pure fap fic forcing him out would have been fine, but given the emotional focus this story has it just doesn't feel good.
justin reijnders
2021-02-15 05:46:03 +0000 UTC
