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Filing Error, Page 19

Wanted to get this one out like a week or two ago but kind of just not had the time, though still going to try and fit in another of both it and A Balanced Defensive Line before the month's out. Am pretty happy with this one at least; admittedly as initially picturing it I was having trouble figuring out how to get this one down to a manageable length but the specific ideas I had in mind should be easy to transplant to the next one now. Would hope this is clear just from the writing but just in case, should clarify that last bit is just kind of a representation of the dilemma Ash is having, not literal. Just figured would say that in case it causes any confusion.

Filing Error, Page 19 Filing Error, Page 19

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Admittedly to me I feel it would make sense if the world see's Ash as the right side even if Ash see's herself as the left side, although I don't really know 'how' Ash would be seen as the left side. It's not like you can accidentally file an adult under baby in the misfile setting. After all in Misfile, Ash did become a girl physically and Emily did lose two years making her two years younger. Given how the system works, in order for her to be aged down, all the files from her life from the age she is now to her previous age, wouldn't be filed at all. As removing age is akin to taking paperwork out of someones file and not putting them back in. By all accounts Ash is a baby, since she's clearly not potty trained anymore. So it would be interesting if Ash and Emily were seeing Ash as she used to be, but having the right side revealed as the truth.

lulshi

I always thought a Misfile changes the world to fit a mistake. As in it doesn't matter which it's just everyone seeing as in diapers is just a normal thing.

Abe


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