Ash Dawn TG page 23
Added 2023-01-11 17:15:59 +0000 UTCTrying some stuff with the shading again, lmk if there's anything you like or more importantly, dislike so I can focus on changing that.
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Thanks! And I think I see what you mean. I was trying to keep the panels with the darker night background consistently darker than the ones without it but I guess that just makes things look inconsistent overall even if they're consistent to their own two backgrounds.
2023-01-12 00:17:55 +0000 UTCGreat job on the foreshortening and low angle panels! I think the shading looks good, she definitely looks like she has some volume to her :p One thing you can do with the shading is keep a more consistent light source between panels? The light direction jumps around from panel to panel right now. I think it's kind of nit picky, but if you're looking for ways to improve the shading it might help. Overall I think it looks great though :D
2023-01-11 20:20:24 +0000 UTCthe shading looks fine to me! also hell yeah this is great, jesse really did a number on her
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