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S5 EP12: TEAM TROUBLE (2/2)

Thanks for the wait! This one's a bit longer than I thought it would be. Hope it paid off.

 

 

 

Whatever THAT means, amirite? :D

Anyway. See ya in the next one! It'll be a bit less intense. Or maybe intense in a different way?

S5 EP12: TEAM TROUBLE (2/2) S5 EP12: TEAM TROUBLE (2/2)

Comments

This is probably one of Jasper’s best arcs in any AU I’ve read of SU. Really cool you’re tapping into her potential!

Alex Foster

This is the start of Jasper's redeemption arc, Once Jasper fully trust Amethyst and Seaglass (and vice versa), Jasper will tell her backstory, like the fact Pink Diamond got shattered by Rose Quartz.

Blazzore

FINALLY, our favorite giant cheese puff is getting the character development she deserves! XD

the web surfer

1. I like that little tidbit about Amethyst learning shapeshifting from Rose. It works as subtle foreshadowing for the characters when they (probably) eventually learn who she really is. 2. I wanted to type this under the last comic, but I figured I'd do so here. I like that Amethyst asked Garnet and Pearl about Jasper and then gets mad when they don't show any interest/empathy. Asking someone to show kindness to someone who has shattered hundreds of their friends is a crazy thing to do and shows how immature Amethyst is. This is an interesting way to show that character flaw. Though I am curious why she didn't ask Rose, given that they all (except Pearl) believe that she's a quarts.

Neko

Finally a good redemption arc for Jasper instead of what the canon series did

Jeromy Tamelie

I think Jasper is seeing what Steven said. I mean she was made as a perfect cut of gem but she now realized that she has to make herself believe she's a perfect cut of gem by working hard to be perfect. I can't wait for Lapis and Peridot freaking out that Jasper is listening to them

Overlord Extreme GameExor

This arch feels right out of the show, it's entirely within Jasper's character to do ANYTHING to win, she broke her moral code by cross gem fusion in the show, so why wouldn't she debase herself by learning from other inferior gems in order to become better than them? If she learns everything that they know, that means that she is better, and they have no advantage over her anymore.

Squat

I think this one is my favourite episode, yeah CG is Steven's daughter, no doubt about it. Word "Perfect" to one of my definition is adaptation, so I 100% agreed with CG. I love seeing Jasper's face when she gets told about it.

Alexander Kovács

What a great choice for poor Jasper! Love this AU's take on developing her, and I'm excited to see where you go from here.

votyasch

Hehehe it was fun to finally get to use that meme

Chekhov

You NAILED IT! 😂 that's exactly what Amethyst was thinking as she looked at CG spin this web lmao

Chekhov

CG is definitely Steven's daughter lol

Sam Williams

I seriously thought they were gonna give Jasper an existential crisis, but it was way better than I thought. I cannot wait to see how this will pan out for Jasper.... I still have some hope that Lapis and Peridot will join at some point

Jon Thomas Cordua

I love the kung fu panda reference, lmao

Nathan

The Looney Tunes is strong with this one... This part was GREAT! I love seeing CG and Amethyst team up and use their unorthodox strategy to defeat the corrupted gem! And CG's monologue about perfection and change was such a nice way to set up a possible redemption of Jasper.

GolGothDrek

Lesson LEARNED! 🥳 Also great use of anchor. I couldn't for the life of me figure out how that could work in combat (tho I did trust you!).

Indigo

Jasper’s entire world view being completely destroyed as the panels progress is somehow both funny and tragic at the same time. At least she’s willing to learn, albeit seemingly begrudgingly

Dice

I'm loving how thoughtful and kind Seaglass is becoming, she takes after her dad so well!

Tara Garrett

Well looks like Seaglass and Amethyst has changed Jasper for the good of better.

Theodore Vicary

Ahhh, I'm so excited for this!!

Chris

Awesome episode ❤️ I loved that Kung Fu Panda reference 😂

AuzzieAnxiety

AWWWW YISSS JASPER REDEMPTION ARC HERE WE GOOOOO

Cain

Finally, a worthy opponent-

votyasch

fite fite fite

Elias


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