INFECTED HEARTS PT.02 (ILLUSTRATED)
Added 2024-12-04 11:27:33 +0000 UTCCHAPTER 5. A COUPLE
CHAPTER 6. BUMPY ROAD
CHAPTER 7. HOT SHOWER
Some of you may find it slow, but it will take time to develop Adam and Matilda's relationship. I really love when it's as true and authentic as it can be
Comments
Yes, I really like a slow, as realistic as possible tone, but I understand that it can't be overdone. 😊 All these moments are erotic for Adam, but not for Matilda. She just lost her husband and is still in shock from everything that's happening. The dance, Adam's kisses, sitting on his lap, and taking a shower together are just forced circumstances, and there's nothing special about it for her. Maybe she kinda notices it as being wrong and bad, but for no her head is filled with other things. I think if the story was only about Matilda and Adam without other survivors, it would be a bit 1) strange and 2) boring. I already mentioned in the discussion chat that I want it to be like The Walking Dead from Telltale. Somethnig like that. A planet full of zombies would indeed be very boring. I'm glad this story won, actually. I've had ideas for a story set in some kind of apocalypse for a long time. There are very few. So this one is a great opportunity to create something great and amazing)))
AFS
2024-12-19 13:23:07 +0000 UTCReally like the start of the Story so far, the slow start is nice, for my taste it can even be slower because rushing into erotic scenes with no meaning is just lame. So big fan of taking your time with the mom son relationship. Also i like that you include different characters (Carlo and suzie) which gives more possibilities for a good storie, cause a planet full of zombies would be a bit boring. Promising start^^
Kalli
2024-12-07 21:42:21 +0000 UTC
