The Perfect Dress (Chapter 1)
Added 2019-03-04 00:58:31 +0000 UTC[Update 20 Jul 2019: Fixed a few typos and made one very minor plot tweak so that something makes a little more sense and fits better with the imminent release of part 2. The plot tweak starts from page 6 onwards. To be honest, it's so small you might not even notice it, but it was bugging me!]
Synopsis
Ah, weddings. They're stressful enough at the best of times! But when you're working ungodly hours to afford a dress that your future sister in law is secretly sabotaging your efforts to fit into, well, things seem sure to end in disaster.
At least there's the cake testing to look forward to...
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PS Huge thanks to my patrons for making this story possible. I really hope you enjoy it!
Comments
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Adriano Ziffer
2020-02-02 00:58:39 +0000 UTCI just read it a second time, since you published part 2. How old are actually Charlotte and Amelia? respectively 38 and 18?
Adriano Ziffer
2019-08-01 12:10:35 +0000 UTCI have been experimenting with Amelia pics - this is as good an idea as any I've had!
Halrion
2019-06-25 21:30:58 +0000 UTCWould love a pic of Amelia slumped in her chair as the button on her jeans gives way :-)
JDart
2019-06-25 17:32:52 +0000 UTCAwesome, looking forward to it. It does help to have a bit of a mental image of the characters, just for a reference regarding their size. These girls must already be rather plump, which is great of course. Here's to hoping they spend plenty of time in those small bikinis. Looks like they might be running out of room soon.
2019-03-22 10:47:10 +0000 UTCThanks! I'm working on part 2 alongside the next part of TLWL. The pool pic inspired the story. The blondes in the background are meant to be Lady Charlotte and Amelia. Their looks have changed a bit since I made the pic. Amelia (back right) would be a touch slenderer than she is in the pic but still with a more notable belly; Charlotte would be... well, bigger.. The dark haired girl in the background is Oliver's fiance Emily. Lazing in the foreground on the inflatable is Angelica, who'll have a cameo in this story, and a story or two of her own as well. There'll be updated pics of all of them to come too.
Halrion
2019-03-16 23:45:32 +0000 UTCYep, this is another very good one. Are the characters in the story in any way related to the women in the pool in your drawing from several months ago? Or are those just generic women? Also, here's to hoping you find time to work on the next chapter. The story setup is so intriguing that it hardly seems fair that now we have to wait for the rest of it.
2019-03-15 01:02:21 +0000 UTCWay to go!
Adriano Ziffer
2019-03-14 15:18:34 +0000 UTCThanks Jordan!
Halrion
2019-03-11 19:15:30 +0000 UTC
