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You do have a point. I do wish to praise our artist here, but I also want to see continued improvement just for the sake of it, if anything. I'd say it's broadly okay to have "almost clothed" NSFWs this time around, but I do agree that if there can be more improvement, that'll be good. I don't think the boobs are THAT off this time around - in Celestia and Luna's case, at least, it's helped that they're pushed out by their costumes from below and by Celestia's arms from the sides in her case. But I do get what you mean too.
TwilightIsMagic
2021-01-07 20:01:01 +0000 UTCAgreeing with the above comment, in that the nude versions had some issues. The nipples shouldn't be facing forward so much and there should be more weight to the boobs. The vulvas are also more prominent than they should be.
SigmasonicX
2021-01-07 19:02:44 +0000 UTCHi, I have a little constructive criticism for you. In no way, however, I intend to offend you or your works and I hope this will not be transmitted, since in my language (Italian), I am using the most friendly tones possible and with the translation I do not really know if these tones can be misunderstood. In case I immediately apologize for any misunderstandings. I state that I love your works and I really like your style, especially with regards to SFW designs. Instead, as regards the NSFW versions, they give me the idea of a bit of forcing, of fake: practically a dressed body to which clothes have been removed and not a naked body to which clothes have been designed. For example, the last "Flutter Kiss" that breast I feels forced, in the sense that the position does not seem natural to me at that size (WOW!). Another example, "Christmas Celestia & Luna" Luna, already seems to me much more natural and coherent than Celestia's breasts, as of those dimensions, without the support of the clothes, they should be lower down, follow a certain physics. Even "Mikasa", as for Luna, the breasts seem very coherent to me, even if in this case the vagina seems to me a little too pronounced for the type of body. I hope you see this criticism, not as an offense to your art (in case I continue to apologize), but only for your personal "growth". After all, if everyone says "beautiful", "awesome", "fantastic", ... you don't have a drive to further mature your style, but get "stranded" at an uncertain trait... Hoping I did something to please you, I wish you a happy new year -\-\-\-|-|-|-/-/-/- Ciao, io avrei una piccola critica costruttiva da farti. In nessun modo comunque intendo offendere te o i tuoi lavori e spero non si trasmetta questo, dato che nella mia lingua (italiano), sto utilizzando toni il più amichevoli possibili e con la traduzione non so effettivamente se questi toni possano essere fraintesi. Nel caso mi scuso da subito di eventuali fraintendimenti. Premetto che le tue opere le adoro ed il tuo stile mi piace davvero tanto, specialmente per quanto riguarda i disegni SFW. Invece per quanto riguarda le versioni NSFW, mi danno l'idea un po'di forzatura, di finto: praticamente un corpo vestito a cui siano stati tolti i vestiti e non un corpo nudo a cui siano stati disegnati dei vestiti. Ad esempio l'ultimo "Flutter Kiss" quel seno mi sa di forzato, nel senso che di quelle dimensioni (WOW!) la posizione non mi sembra naturale. Altro esempio, "Christmas Celestia & Luna" Luna, già mi sembra molto più naturale e coerente rispetto al seno di Celestia, in quanto di quelle dimensioni, senza il sostegno dei vestiti, dovrebbero trovarsi più in basso, seguire una certa fisica. Anche "Mikasa", come per Luna, il seno mi sembra decisamente molto coerente, anche se però in questo caso la vagina mi sembra un tantino troppo pronunciata rispetto al tipo di corporatura. Spero che tu veda questa critica, non come un offesa alla tua arte (nel caso continuo a scusarmi), ma solamente per una tua "crescita" personale. Dopotutto, se tutti dicono "bello", "awesome", "fantastico",... non si ha una spinta per maturare ulteriormente il proprio stile, ma rimanere "arenati" ad un tratto incerto. Sperando di averti fatto una cosa gradita, ti faccio i miei migliori auguri di buon anno
Petardo238
2021-01-07 10:44:53 +0000 UTCFunny, I wasn't even thinking of the lovely Shy pic in terms of boobs very much - but they're great, as she deserves. Same for Celestia and Luna - just big and very big looking great, and I still adore the ara ara energy Celestia gives off and want much more of that. Lovely work. Happy New Year once again~
TwilightIsMagic
2021-01-07 06:55:06 +0000 UTC
