First Person TG Sequence
Added 2019-06-14 10:54:40 +0000 UTCPracticing my first person skills, I really want to do an anthology comic completely in first person but it’s so difficult to draw still!
Comments
I love this. Experimental but oh so intriguing.
Melissa Brown
2019-06-15 03:00:12 +0000 UTCOverall, I have no objection to seeing your warm-ups and practice sketches, because I take it as a welcome reminder that no one is born a great artist. Thank you for sharing!
Perrin Rynning
2019-06-14 14:39:54 +0000 UTCPanel #3 might have worked better, in terms of composition, if you included a mirror. Or maybe showed the person using a smartphone to record their changes; they could have held the smartphone over their shoulder to get a look at their swelling 'caboose'.
Perrin Rynning
2019-06-14 14:38:42 +0000 UTCYou know, I nearly didn’t post it because of that panel. I was really struggling to get the perspective right!
TGAmelia
2019-06-14 11:51:14 +0000 UTCMy only criticism is the third panel. Because it seems that person has the ability to twist their neck like an owl. Which is amazing on it's own but it's also unrealistic and it took out the believabilty of the sequence.
Nathan Racher
2019-06-14 11:47:30 +0000 UTCI will subscribe again soon
xxxixx2
2019-06-14 11:45:51 +0000 UTCI’m sorry to see you go, but I hope you have enjoyed some of my content whilst you pledged! So thanks for what you have pledged. I will still be releasing free content on my Deviant Art so I hope you check that out from time to time 😊
TGAmelia
2019-06-14 11:01:14 +0000 UTCThis the last time I renew my subscription in your channel Amelia.
xxxixx2
2019-06-14 10:57:56 +0000 UTC
