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"Enemy" Started for Comic Tier - Peek

The comic tentatively titled "Enemy" has started, and I'm pouring most of my time into it. Putting some extra details where I can and trying to get a more serious flavor into the Cottonwine world in the process. I'm also taking the time to let the story segments play out how they appear in my mind, which is sort of like a movie, initially. I kind of want this one to be a little bit "next level" for me.

The comic is about a human man and an tribal anthro wolf female together. It's something I've been curious about but didn't want to try to do until I had a little tale in mind that justified it. There are a lot of ideas that I think about and that people ask for, but until I can think of a good way to present it, I tend to hold off.

The plant he's harvesting isn't a source of cottonwine. The drug doesn't make an appearance in this story at all. That's just some winter plant, maybe for medicine.

I've also started the next Brooke In College page for the comic tier ($6+). That's a story that badly needs to be resumed.

"Enemy" Started for Comic Tier - Peek

Comments

It's all good to me, but probably 40/60

Jay Naylor

Whats your plan on the ratio between the "good" stuff and story on this one?

Dom T

this page certainly looks "next gen" for you lol, good work! I love your description of the character setup here, can barely wait until its out.

Dom T

Darn, looked good

Reptiles of Lustria

I second all of this!

Dale Evans

I too wish to see the next part of it

pokediginut

Tribal shit is the best

pokediginut

You and me both

pokediginut

It’s one of my absolute favorite works from you like literally top 5 and it’s not even complete :) I hope one day it’s properly voted on for completion. I’m very eager to see the other races and learn about them (and to see the Mistress’s many offspring)

pokediginut

Never finished. It didn't perform well in polling, and I had a lot of other things that kept me busy.

Jay Naylor

Was 'The Mission' ever completed, or is it on hold indefinitely?

Robert Kassebaum

Also i LOVE Brooke goes to college, very happy to see it resume as well

Justforthelols

Very happy to see this! I just wanna say that i really love your more tribal themed work and im happy to be seeing more of it!

Justforthelols

awesome! great idea ;)

joachim^_^

Oh fuck yes, Cottonwine.

KchulaRrit

Looking forward to reading both. :D

Silvador

Also I kinda made a story like that with A human and Anthro Tiger which was made into a short comic.

BluePhantom90

I can This comic will be interesting with a Human male and Anthro wolf Female together. If you need help with the story I am willing to throw some idea's.

BluePhantom90

Jay, you're making my year right now. No joke.

Bob

This looks exciting!

PrescottMatthews

Honestly, whenever I look back at the old pages, it makes me want to continue doing them. So, it may continue at a slower pace, with each page as a project, each time. Thank you for the interest!

Jay Naylor

I've offered it to be the focus of my future projects before, and it hasn't performed well in those polls. But who knows?

Jay Naylor

It might just be an herb that goes well with roast rabbit.

Wm. Van Ness

Excellent. I’ve long wanted to see a comic like this from you and how you’d go about it. In the Cottonwine world no less my favorite. I’ve loved seeing Rayka and am quite curious how you’ll have this human. Next month is gonna he even more exciting cause I also can’t wait to see what themes you explore and how you characterize this couple :)

pokediginut

I recall him saying it may be a future comic vote for him to finish up. I hope so. I wanna see more of it same as you. :)

pokediginut

I may go back to it, but it's low priority compared to the official comic updates and Brooke's popularity. It's a time budgeting thing.

Jay Naylor

Not to sound ungrateful or anything, but whatever happened to Mistress Theresea?

Asterion Del Toro


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