Thuinn: Kee-Va's World

Love it!

Crunchy

Just so original ! great job ! I love the concept it's a little bite a Tolkien's map !

Daphnis07

The origins bit reads correctly to me. I don't see how that is a mistake?

Wildeyes

Solid backbone to a world where you can easily throw in sexy adventures

That black guy

in the Vril part => within the sap of certain plants instead of withing

Ryochou

Hey Mark, some spelling mistakes i found :

Ryochou

WOW unexpected GREAT WORK MARK

John Smith

I like that theory. My whole goal for these set-ups to have it be mysterious. I want there to be three or four possible origins for each race, with none of them being canon.

Let face it, if beastman appeared short after the human it mean teh first Humas on Thuiin started fucking teh local fauna and teh result were the beastman, easy explanation are the best ones. Great work, a few comments would be that Saurians are only cannibal if they eat other sairians, except if you take the not strict definbition of "eating sentient beings" also the Vril-ya would be more interesting if you kept theit past in mystery ^^

Ace

I don't know. That's exactly the depth of lore that I don't enjoy. Maybe she's the princess only because she was randomly born as a monkey, and her tribe happens to worship monkeys. Maybe the name "Monkey Temple" is just a name, like how "Rhode Island" isn't an island.

Bow before your Monkey Princess, inferior Human scum 😈😈😈 Also tho if beast people traits are random and a monkey mommy like Bandara could have like a hippo son how is there a coherent Monkey-related culture or hierarchy for their to be a specifically Monkey Temple what did a bunch of strangers get together and build it (>asking Mark lore questions lol)

makai9

Thanks. I'm going to wait to see if anyone finds any mistakes. I'm terrible at finding grammar errors.

Damn I really like this! You did a great job on it Mark. I don't personally see any errors, but I could be wrong. If any of my OCs were in this world, they'd definitely be humans who find themselves constantly tied up with Beastmen.

DarkGen95