Three Stories
Added 2017-03-12 01:49:46 +0000 UTCSo one of the requests I got from my Dukes this month was for a new story. I've really hit a weird block with my writing. It is very easy for me to start a story, but at some point I always feel it go off the rails, and I find myself becoming embarrased by what I've written, so it never gets finished or published. I think I have a lot of these unfinished works hanging around.
Here are three that I've essentially finished, although I keep finding spelling and grammatical errors. If anyone reads these and notices any, please leave your edit in a comment. That might help these stories see the light of the internet.
One story is just one of my generic fantasies about a young cocky uber-stud with superhuman sexual abilities going against a sexy disfunctional family. The Horn Family versus Horny Stud is basically what I fantasized about in High School, I think. A sexy macho asshole rolls into town, picks a family that has a sexy mom, cute daughters, and a fem-boy, then proceeds to fuck the shit out of all of them until they enjoy it.
The other two stories are catfight stories. I wrote these a while ago, predecessors to the F3L comcis I'm donig now. One is Lois Lane versus Mary Jane, and the other is Batgirl versus Spider-Gwen (or Spider-Woman as she's called in story). These fights are facilited by a magical interdimenional character who takes superheroes from different universes and makes them fight for her own enjoyment.
Pretty silly.
I've got one more story incoming. Hope it'll be done by Monday maybe. It's about Bel. I've tried to finish it like three times before, and failed each time. So maybe I shouldn't even be saying anything about it. Hmmm.
Comments
wow mark, all these stories are amazing! I don't even care that they're not done, any word you write turns to gold! Keep up the great work!
hannibal
2017-04-01 20:22:12 +0000 UTCI still very much liked the story especially the end.
2017-03-12 22:49:34 +0000 UTCHere are the errors. There could be more. HSvsHF grammatical errors -pronorpgahy is pornography page2, -his big ass should be her big ass p10, -"that she masterbating" should be "that she was masturbating" p10, -Her arms felt like noodle should be her arms felt like noodles p11, -eroic is erotic p11, -smething is something p11, -humored here is humored her, -masterbation is masturbation p11 also masterbating p11, -instead of "The size differential was insane." maybe "The constrasting size was insane." p12, -"your" should be you p13, -masterbae more furiously=masturbate more furiously p13, -masterbate=masturbate, p13, -"spanked and orgasm out of me." = "spanked an orgasm out of me" p13, -intimidating should be intimidated p14, -wholy = wholly p15, -"bleat like a lamp"?= "bleat like a lamb" p15, -heself= herself p15, -"hymen. Then was for "= "hymen. That was for " p16, -noce= nose p17, -"He was cumming he was close."=" He was close to cumming" p17, -"before doing soft? "= "before going soft?" p18
2017-03-12 22:46:53 +0000 UTCI liked the Horn Family one it was a very fun read. But there is a lot of errors.
2017-03-12 22:30:21 +0000 UTCYeah, that's part of why I haven't been able to finish anything. I let the story go where it goes, and when I re-read it I think "What the fuck?"
2017-03-12 07:48:45 +0000 UTCI'll give it a read, though some of your modern style stories are just a tad too brutal for my tastes/
Dantels
2017-03-12 07:18:07 +0000 UTCWow, 3 stories when blocked, you must be a writing machine when inspired, great job
Ace
2017-03-12 07:09:53 +0000 UTC
