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adblood 32

Another week, another neat chapter! 17,6k words!

Unfortunately, NO CHAPTER NEXT WEEK. I have to do a lot of driving and I have to leave my computer behind. Thanks for understanding!

Next chapter should be March 1st!

Thanks for reading~

Comments

Ooooh things are gonna go DOWN aren't they. Thank you for the chapter and the warning about next week - at least we get a pause here because if there was a cliffhanger halfway through the Battle for the Gate I might cry

Beard

Great chap, this really feels like the next chap is gonna go crazy, all the players are getting ready for the last act of the Gate scenario

Nathan moi

Just kidding :)

Cameron C

I’m sad we won’t get one next week, but absence makes the heart grow more filled with rage until it bursts out like the red hulk.

Cameron C

fixed~ thanks!

Arcs

pg1: he will kill verything within a kilometer -> everything pg11: splashing in every direction like at thousand released bullets that carved into the ground -> like a thousand pg12: adamantium became monwire again. -> monowire pg15: But the physically of the molecularly strong kaiju hair had been too strong -> physicality (i'm not sure on this one) pg16: sent him falling to the round, -> ground pg26: where someone could to a wrong breeze? -> could get hurt to (also unsure on this one) pg26: because then the adamantium had would remain non-tradable, -> adamantium he had pg31: Sally was with Mark, and she wanted to talk to her alone, -> talk to him alone (I assume this is Sally wanting to talk to Mark). pg32: “… Yeah,” Sally said. I kinda -> Sally said. "I kinda pg34: When rained it hurricaned, apparently. -> When it rained pg34: receiving notices then ever other major power -> every pg36: why you were curt with after whatever -> curt with him after Fantastic chapter! Next one is going to be big and I'm very excited! I hope your drive goes well.

DeadicatedReader

She's detestable without being a cartoon character. I also want her to be a red smudge, but man, that's a very 3D side antagonist.

Rayse

Wait, wait, tutorial = winning power from the demons? Is this a revelation? It sounds like it might be a revelation?

Rayse

You know I really can't help but hate Kardi, would not mind it if she became a red smudge on a wall.

Selvias

Thanks for the chapter, feel like a lot of pieces are in position now. Curious to see how it plays out!

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