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Added 2021-11-14 08:44:29 +0000 UTCThe young princess of Songli had made a lot of
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That spell sounds AWESOME; Hermetic Storm; can't help but imagine everything freezing dramatically, covered in wires, and suddenly, for an instant, a rainbow colored distortion in the air, a brief instant, and everything is cut by an inhumanly sharp edge such that it looks unnatural, and a bit eerie
Gavriel
2022-01-04 09:33:05 +0000 UTCEric's version of flowers is a big ass tree π
Gavriel
2021-12-19 17:52:39 +0000 UTCfixed! thanks
Arcs
2021-11-18 23:10:43 +0000 UTC"Erick was happy to discover that screeching adamantium gave off a slightly nicer noise than platinum when it encountered <strike>under</strike> multi-ton pressures."
Benjamin Meyers
2021-11-18 19:15:49 +0000 UTCfixed! thanks
Arcs
2021-11-16 21:12:00 +0000 UTCtyvm ftc "And he was; [p]aranoia was hitting hard today, it seemed." "[Weather Control] would likely not last long..." i thought this was [Control Weather] but could have changed/stylistic choice "...he was thinking about Teressaβs flight spell, but not willing to commit in that direction; [n]ot yet, anyway." cheers
Robbs
2021-11-16 18:27:05 +0000 UTCnice chapter, ty!
fbt
2021-11-14 22:48:54 +0000 UTCFixed! (yes, you are right)
Arcs
2021-11-14 21:47:57 +0000 UTCReally loved the detailed explanations and discussions on the runework. Felt fairly organic the way you incorporated it into the conversations and story, as well as tying it into Erick's own struggles with enchanting and contrasting the differences. I think most of all, this chapter really spurred the imagination, with it being so focused on all that magic.
Niraada
2021-11-14 21:33:41 +0000 UTCShould the crusher use [Telekinesis] and not Telepathy? It's for moving the metal after all
Jack Trowell
2021-11-14 21:23:03 +0000 UTCfixed!
Arcs
2021-11-14 19:16:52 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter 'token of own severe' <- missing word(s)?
Corwin Amber
2021-11-14 18:55:32 +0000 UTC
