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Warm air caressed Ava’s skin, curling into her

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Yes! Back to magic discussions and experiments!

fixed~

Arcs

fixed! 'attempting fate' was a play on words; a more active way to say she was attempting to make her Fate. if it doesn't work then it doesn't work, but i thought it did

Arcs

I love the discussions on the nature of magic... *sigh*

Monomatopoeia

"attempting fate" - did you mean "tempting fate"? "everyone like apples" - did you mean "everyone liked apples"? "ones everyone actually concern themselves" - did you mean "ones everyone actually concerns themselves"?

Monomatopoeia

'invade my mind, Ava' invade -> invaded 'Ava double down' double -> doubled 'but does not' but -> that 'right now, was' <-sentence needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber

I really think he could bring the dead back if he tried. Magic is a power mightier than gods. Could erick use reincarnate like the D&D spell to bring back that half angel lady that simply ceased being in the sundering? If you change her race, could she live again?

Alchemy

Bring back those who are lost and make them found. I call upon the void to give back those loved and lost. From mana to essence, from essence to soul. From mana to flesh and bone. Grant them a vessel so that we may bring them home. Resurrection! (and or Reincarnate)

Alchemy


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