095 - Jane
Added 2020-07-17 21:04:46 +0000 UTCInside of a room of Windy Manor, Jane stood in
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"You can't build a world on ideas." thats where you are wrong good sir or madam.
Alchemy
2020-08-01 22:58:09 +0000 UTCSimply glorious. What a chapter! Really made me bask in a sense of wonder at the magic in Veird. Also a taster of the complex relationship that Jane's mother had with the two of them. That will be an interesting, although clearly painful, journey.
Monomatopoeia
2020-07-18 21:11:10 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter, I really liked it. Feeling magic for the awesome!
Lessthan
2020-07-18 19:50:42 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-07-18 16:51:53 +0000 UTCall fixed! thanks
Arcs
2020-07-18 16:51:46 +0000 UTCI was feeling the same way. Beginning with her frustration and sense of helplessness, building up towards her misplaced anger at Erick before finally reaching catharsis at the end. Honestly one of the most rewarding chapters to read through of ANY stories I follow.
Niraada
2020-07-18 14:24:30 +0000 UTCJane's character sort of felt like she was languishing in the background for a while now (for totally valid reasons) and this chapter definitely pushed her back onto the stage again. Well done! The omni elemental scene was a pleasure to read and imagine. I can definitely see why the dragon (who's name I shall not say because I mangle it) would come investigate.
Kapelteta
2020-07-18 07:09:45 +0000 UTCI usually prefer Erick chapters, but I really enjoyed this one. It almost felt long and complete enough to be its own short story. :)
Corwin Amber
2020-07-18 06:57:41 +0000 UTC'didn’t really details' -> 'didn’t really need details'
Corwin Amber
2020-07-18 06:55:08 +0000 UTC'eagerly trade' trade -> traded
Corwin Amber
2020-07-18 06:39:26 +0000 UTC'She’s wear her own pair' She's -> She'd
Corwin Amber
2020-07-18 06:14:27 +0000 UTCTypo - but she didn’t really details.... I’m assuming you intended to add the word “”need””
Kevin Mendoza
2020-07-18 05:31:58 +0000 UTC'care is she lied' is -> if
Corwin Amber
2020-07-18 05:09:05 +0000 UTCThis was amazing. I am so curious what class abilities she has to choose from!
Scott Frederiksen
2020-07-18 03:50:54 +0000 UTCThanks!
Arcs
2020-07-18 01:16:59 +0000 UTCThanks!
Arcs
2020-07-18 01:16:55 +0000 UTCThis chapter was amazing, wow.
Adamus Papa
2020-07-17 22:26:11 +0000 UTCHoly crap that was good! This entire chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions, and the encounter at the end... freaking incredible! You've really outdone yourself here, Arcs.
Niraada
2020-07-17 22:11:35 +0000 UTC
