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Added 2020-06-21 19:30:42 +0000 UTCErick laid upon a fluffy white cloud in the mid
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I'm surprised that they had trouble paying Erick a more respectable number of darkchips here. From how the economy has been outlined, it would seem like shadelings have a surplus of chips overall.
PrimalShadow
2020-07-06 08:10:32 +0000 UTCIt would be a neat offensive spell though...
Lessthan
2020-06-24 22:37:22 +0000 UTCall fixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-06-23 17:17:52 +0000 UTC"she’s always say that being Good was good" -> "she’d always say that being Good was good"
Monomatopoeia
2020-06-23 17:13:19 +0000 UTC"while while" -> "while"
Monomatopoeia
2020-06-23 17:10:25 +0000 UTC"hand out" -> "handout" (being used as a noun)
Monomatopoeia
2020-06-23 17:07:44 +0000 UTC"notions to being that were inherently unknowable" -> " notions to beings that were inherently unknowable"
Monomatopoeia
2020-06-23 17:04:08 +0000 UTCI mean, it depends on the evil but its almost always better to get rid of it now then later. The authors world suffers from a very human problem. When it comes to problems and people that would be difficult to deal with initially we procrastinate. We don't wanna pay the upfront cost so we put it off until we literally have no other option. And sure we didn't spend a million lives to stop them and nevermind that it ultimately cost us 10 million in the end cause that not the us of today's problem. We can worry about it when its do or die. I suppose that's what I like about his story. Its just the same very believable cycle we deal with here just in a more monstrous form.
Althaelus
2020-06-22 05:57:38 +0000 UTCYay backstory on Teresa! I really do like her. Also I have no idea where this story is ultimately going and for that I salute you Arcs. It's rare to read a story that I enjoy as much as this one. You have done a great job with your villains. They are evil as all get out, but still, is it worth the cost to get rid of them?
Kapelteta
2020-06-22 04:30:43 +0000 UTCyou're welcome!
Arcs
2020-06-21 23:32:11 +0000 UTCAll fixed! Thanks
Arcs
2020-06-21 21:05:24 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter
Corwin Amber
2020-06-21 20:59:39 +0000 UTC'think about my tribe' -> 'think about was my tribe'
Corwin Amber
2020-06-21 20:48:25 +0000 UTC'[Prismatic War] permissions' War -> Ward
Corwin Amber
2020-06-21 20:29:23 +0000 UTCThanks!
Matthew Clark
2020-06-21 19:32:10 +0000 UTC
