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This chapter brought so many emotions on me that it was a roller coaster. Awesome dude.

Thundermike00

That was the whole thing - being a wizard was fraught with danger. If you messed up your teleport, you're dead. There was no easy-mode. This seems to happen when there is an error, or he messes up the spell in some way. [Zone of Peace] nearly fried Erick. I don't quite understand this occasion - why did his verse change? What happened to Erick - was this an outside influence. Is it related to the Shades, Gods or anyone else?

Monomatopoeia

My favorite chapters are magic making chapters. So fun.

Whoops! You spotted something that should not be! Somehow, this paragraph got cut from this edit (i have since put it back in): And then some other force took a hold of his mind. Poi’s sapphire blue eyes got really big, or maybe it was an illusion of some sort. The world flickered blue, twice, and then Erick was in the admissions room of the Church hospital. He knew this place. But everything was tainted red. He had blood in his eyes, didn’t he?

Arcs

all fixed, thanks!

Arcs

thanks for the chapter

Corwin Amber

'realized that he song' he -> the

Corwin Amber

'only think we are not' think -> thing

Corwin Amber

'near the main rain' 'rain' (sounds wrong, but might just be me)

Corwin Amber

Fuck. The Shades probably kidnapped Erick! Poi couldn't teleport, which is a Shade effect, and the "many hands carried him away".

Horius

Was it ever explained why making a spell makes people collapse and go into what sounds like full body failure? Like surely them old world wizards weren't making spells constantly on the edge of death from it?

Althaelus

The end had me laughing. I had an inkling of what was coming when Phager said there was a spell for each section like rock or fire. Eric just had to go and pull from the whole cycle.

Chris

You saw it in this same chapter: [Gravity Strainer]. Erick can set it to 'rads', too. However, this is most useful when it's just a few meters of water between the rads and retrieval; not monster corpses spread out over many kilometers.

Arcs

Didn't he have some sort of rad attracting spell back in the sewer house days?

Noppes


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