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Added 2020-06-09 01:25:31 +0000 UTCBack in the third floor classroom, where dense
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Ah. I see the confusion. You are correct. Component parts do not get used up. I'll edit that a bit, actually.
Arcs
2020-06-26 22:02:33 +0000 UTCNear the start of the chapter he's talking like Pure Reflection Ward would get used up if he made a t3 combined with Force Wall. It was my understanding that the component parts of higher tier spells were still separate and usable on their own, even if they were used in a recipe for something higher? This shouldn't be the case, considering the recent example of him reusing Prime Area in two different spells.
Dax
2020-06-26 21:44:01 +0000 UTCI feel that Erick is teetering on a precipice. I feel like his desires to end the Shades and their ilk is an anathema to him, yet he persists because of the potential harm they will do and it is tearing him apart. Very interested about the stats, but can't help feel it's too good to be true. I'm looking forward to finding out about the nature of Candlepoint, too. I love that you sprinkle in a bit of magical testing, always a crowd pleaser...
Monomatopoeia
2020-06-09 22:15:05 +0000 UTCErick has always had a thing against the police, even way back in the early chapters, because social workers and the police have a very close relationship. Erick's police relationships are not really explored in the text, though.
Arcs
2020-06-09 08:35:23 +0000 UTCFelt a little too much like a BLM mentality when he was at the guard. Sorry, but I'm currently a bit sensitive about that group. Not even in America, but the still had to destroy the store of my sister and beat her husband up. In my country, we don`t even have a problem with police violence! Might later delete the comments before those thugs somehow found my wrongspeak.
Horius
2020-06-09 08:25:48 +0000 UTCErick writing out all of his goals like that really showed how much work there still is to do.
BigBuckler
2020-06-09 04:46:03 +0000 UTCI'm curious about the new stats.
Scott Frederiksen
2020-06-09 03:10:09 +0000 UTCThank you for this chapter. I'm looking forward to his gate spell (whenever he gets around to it) and whatever familiar he decides on as a 2nd one :)
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 02:40:42 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-06-09 02:09:32 +0000 UTC' If you had less— if Veird had less people like you, less people' all 3 cases of 'less' should be 'fewer' (i think)
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 02:05:37 +0000 UTCI mean... in the very next sentence he says that war is sometimes necessary. but yah. i see what you're saying. : )
Arcs
2020-06-09 01:59:18 +0000 UTC"He said, “I don’t want to be the person who calls for war." -- this is funny. Erick is practically Cato the Censor yelling out "Ar’Kendrithyst must be destroyed" at every chance he gets
Obran
2020-06-09 01:54:13 +0000 UTC'in sky far above' -> 'in the sky far above'
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:51:48 +0000 UTCthat one is correct, but i can see how you would make this mistake.
Arcs
2020-06-09 01:50:06 +0000 UTC'room the clung' the -> that
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:49:17 +0000 UTC'wine dark eyes' wine -> wide
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:48:28 +0000 UTC'was liking looking' liking -> like
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:47:57 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-06-09 01:45:02 +0000 UTC'you to free reign' -> 'you free reign'
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:39:04 +0000 UTCperfect timing :) I was just looking for something to read and here this came along
Corwin Amber
2020-06-09 01:34:18 +0000 UTC
