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Added 2020-05-08 00:03:27 +0000 UTCKal’Duresh was a white-walled mountain oasis in
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Whoops! Fixed. thanks
Arcs
2020-05-21 05:09:21 +0000 UTC> Spur was roughly 12 kilometers in diameter, which was actually over 450 square kilometers I think you made a mistake here. 450 ~ pi * 12^2, but the formula A = pi*r^2 requires the RADIUS, not the DIAMETER.
PrimalShadow
2020-05-21 05:00:14 +0000 UTCOdd! I did not delete it. Patreon must have. I have the email copy though. But I'll have to do those edits later. Thanks for reading!
Arcs
2020-05-09 09:41:33 +0000 UTCI wrote a comment with several typos I saw, but it just disappeared. Arcs, if you removed it that's fine, but if it was Patreon (I did several edits, and I don't know if that triggered something) tell me and I'll write it again.
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-09 09:38:36 +0000 UTCFun fact: You used the word "Erick" 220 times this chapter ~
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-09 09:31:30 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter!! Did I see a Silverite death flag waving in the air? My eyesight is getting pretty bad. Mmm, yeah, let's go with that.
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-09 09:17:10 +0000 UTCI mean an archmage making something explode in spectacular manner... kinda expected?
Kapelteta
2020-05-08 06:00:22 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter :) and thankfully your chapters are nice and long, so I don't mind helping with the editing
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 02:11:37 +0000 UTCJeeze! It's like I didn't even edit! I thought I did...
Arcs
2020-05-08 02:03:39 +0000 UTC'told him, though Poi' though -> through
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 02:02:06 +0000 UTC'Grand Ruby Slimes' -> 'Grand Ruby Mimics'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 02:00:47 +0000 UTCGood chapter. I was kind of hoping the others would be all WTF when he used the hydrogen bombs.
Chris
2020-05-08 01:59:57 +0000 UTC'to the ange' ange -> angel
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 01:42:20 +0000 UTC'monster major monster' -> 'major monster'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 01:41:10 +0000 UTCBah! Fixed. Thank you.
Arcs
2020-05-08 01:38:49 +0000 UTC'working with murders' murders -> murderers
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 01:33:18 +0000 UTCFixed, fixed.
Arcs
2020-05-08 01:30:54 +0000 UTC'A Kill an Exterminate Quest' this sounds wrong, but I might be misremembering what you called it last time
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 01:28:49 +0000 UTC'them, and such' -> 'them, and as such'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 01:26:44 +0000 UTCAlready fixed! Refresh the page. : ) Patreon doesn't play well with boxes, so when i finished fixing up one, i C+P'd it over, and missed a few things. whoops
Arcs
2020-05-08 01:23:35 +0000 UTCThe two character status screens seem identical, despite the large increase in xp between the two. Typo?
Nedardo
2020-05-08 01:16:02 +0000 UTCHa. Exponential notation. Good plan.
Conrad Wong
2020-05-08 01:04:08 +0000 UTCalso fixed, thank you
Arcs
2020-05-08 01:00:37 +0000 UTC'Not too put' too -> to (i think)
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 00:57:16 +0000 UTCfixed!
Arcs
2020-05-08 00:56:11 +0000 UTCWhoops! fixed. thanks
Arcs
2020-05-08 00:56:06 +0000 UTC'were a good idea a land of tangled stone' -> 'were a good idea in a land of tangled stone' (or something similar)
Corwin Amber
2020-05-08 00:51:23 +0000 UTCAnd then his thoughts turned to the ange. ange --> angel “It you would call it as such!” It --> If He wasn’t going to answer that question, was he? No matter; Erick wasn’t on-site, anyway.” Stray quotation mark Also, the two status windows both have the same stats (but different XP numbers), showing level 76 and 31 points before and after the slaughter.
loimprevisto
2020-05-08 00:50:00 +0000 UTCThis was great. I was wondering how Siccero was able to stay as Guildmaster for so long and how she balanced her life between Spur and the Kingdoms. This just really injected a whole bunch of life into her character in my opinion.
Seadrake
2020-05-08 00:42:35 +0000 UTC
