080 - End Book 3
Added 2020-04-04 23:43:31 +0000 UTCIn the course of defending himself and his city
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It sounds like Silverite was colluding, either in acceding to Portal's demands or to look like she was. In exchange for concessions obv.
Drake_Azathoth
2020-04-05 18:54:57 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-04-05 17:30:33 +0000 UTC> Apogough took a while to respond. Silence stretched, then broke, as he said, “Then this is goodbye.” “Does it?” “It does. I see that, now. I had hoped— It doesn’t matter what I hoped.” I think this is a typo, should it be “Then this means goodbye.”?
Deegles
2020-04-05 14:50:08 +0000 UTCIf I was Portal I would have prioritazed the ban of the (future possible) gates rather than the Farm.
2020-04-05 07:57:37 +0000 UTCThere's always at least one stubborn person! :)
Arcs
2020-04-05 05:00:56 +0000 UTCThat chapter had me sort of all over the place... only thing that I really dont like is the farm going away... thought for sure that Erick would use his 1 off magic item perk to remake the farm shrine... but I can also see why they would choose to go the way they did even if I disagree... also I'm 100% sure at least one of the farmer families would have chosen to stay... if nothing else as a giant fuck you to the people behind the attack... there is always at least one stubborn sob
Kapelteta
2020-04-05 04:58:08 +0000 UTCThere will be a small break, but maybe only a few days longer than normal between chapters. I have a basic framework, but i need to expand that into a plan.
Arcs
2020-04-05 04:42:11 +0000 UTCWill there be a break? In other words, when do we start to read the new 'book' (although to us it will just be the next chapter) :)
Corwin Amber
2020-04-05 03:36:59 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-04-05 03:21:02 +0000 UTC'bath houses did not have close' -> 'bath houses did not have to close'
Corwin Amber
2020-04-05 03:14:57 +0000 UTCwhoops, fixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-04-05 02:25:13 +0000 UTC'Erick wondered of Melemizargo' of -> if
Corwin Amber
2020-04-05 02:18:17 +0000 UTCLike it's tied up with a bow, all nice like.
PloofDoodle
2020-04-05 02:13:21 +0000 UTC'two women were truly were cursed' - > 'two women were truly cursed'
Corwin Amber
2020-04-05 02:11:44 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks! And yes, there is a Book 4
Arcs
2020-04-05 00:53:22 +0000 UTCGreat ending to the book! I hope there's a next book coming? <<There was a very slight hiccup in the music as the band in the dancing featherball>> I guess that should be "as the band took in"?
Mike G.
2020-04-05 00:51:21 +0000 UTCThat was quite a thing! Poor Eric and Jane have been through a lot.
Conrad Wong
2020-04-05 00:49:33 +0000 UTC
